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有效Email寫作 GlobalEnglish 精英文化事業 單元內容 1)英文寫作注意事項及常犯寫作錯誤 (40mins) 2)範例練習-中翻英(15mins) 3)範例解析 (15mins) 4)QA(20mins) 1)英文寫作注意事項及常犯寫作錯誤 1.目的是什麼? 商業書信或一般書信 Do you want to come to my party? I would like to invite you to my party. 2.對象是誰 ? 新舊客戶，國籍。 3.主旨? 簡潔有力 RE/SUBJ: My Birthday Party will be on May 15th. RE/SUBJ: My Birthday. RE/SUBJ: Please Let me know when the new shipment is. RE/SUBJ: New Shipment. 4.內容? 倒金字塔寫法。直接點出主要目的，再詳述細節。 1)英文寫作注意事項及常犯寫作錯誤 1)英文寫作注意事項及常犯寫作錯誤 1)英文寫作注意事項及常犯寫作錯誤 1)英文寫作注意事項及常犯寫作錯誤 1)英文寫作注意事項及常犯寫作錯誤 1)英文寫作注意事項及常犯寫作錯誤 1)英文寫作注意事項及常犯寫作錯誤 1)英文寫作注意事項及常犯寫作錯誤 1)英文寫作注意事項及常犯寫作錯誤 1)英文寫作注意事項及常犯寫作錯誤 1)英文寫作注意事項及常犯寫作錯誤 3)大家來找碴 3)大家來找碴 * * 連接詞和轉折詞 conjunction – 正確的使用連接詞，可以讓句子更加順暢通順。但是連接詞使用錯 誤，可是會讓整句話的意思改變連接詞有那些?? 幼兒組: and, but, so, or,……… 青年組: because, although, however, since…. 成人組: in other words, on the other hand, as a result, due to…. 範例1 Although my saving account earns compound interest, and I make lots of money each year, but I still need to close my account due to moving to another country for work. Although/ Though/Even though 雖然 在中文的寫作中, 雖然和但是通常都會連用, 但是英文寫作, although和but 不可互用 請登入參考GlobalEnglish/學習技巧中心/文法/中級/連接詞:表示因果 修改後 Although my saving account earns compound interest, and I make lots of money each year, I still need to close my account due to moving to another country for work. PS Because 和 so也不可同時出現 Because the weather is nice, so I want to go to the beach. 範例2 Despite it’s a new car, it immediately begins to depreciate and is worth less than you paid for it. Even if it’s a new car, it immediately begins to depreciate and is worth less than you paid for it . Even though it’s a new car, it immediately begins to depreciate and is worth less than you paid for it . Even it’s a new car, it immediately begins to depreciate and is worth less than you paid for it . Despite/ In spite of 儘管 並非連接詞, 而是介系詞, 後面加名詞。 Even if 即使/ 就算, 和even though用法相同, 但語意不同 Eve