高一英语9月 月考作文评讲ppt.pptVIP

常用表达: 外貌特征：beautiful, pretty, fat, thin, handsome, good-looking, healthy, strong, near-sighted ... 性格特点：friendly, patient, kind, kind-hearted, humorous, hard-working, confident, wise, be strict with sb. about sth. ... 年龄：at the age of 20, in one’s fifties ... 兴趣爱好：be good at, be interested in, be fond of, be crazy about, enjoy doing, do well in, have a talent for ... 教育背景：graduate from, be admitted to ... University, get / receive a master’s degree, further education ... 经历：become a member of, devote ... to doing sth., work late into night, make up one’s mind, overcome difficulties ... 评价：respect for, be considered as, be famous / known as, make contributions to, one of the greatest teachers, set a good example, think highly of, not only my teacher but also my friend ... 审题: 题目要求描写一位“我”的新的英语老师，这类文章属于记叙文。 描写外表、文化和老师特点用一般现在时态；讲述事件用一般过去时态。 第三人称 1）我的新的英语老师是一位很帅气的男士，名叫Lin Shan。2）他中等身材。3）他总是戴着一副精致的眼镜。4）他看上去很年轻。5）据说他1997年从清华大学毕业后一直在我们学校任教。6）他知识丰富以至于他解释语法解释得非常清楚。7）他的课堂生动、活泼，因此使我们对英语很感兴趣想要从他那儿学得更多。8)虽然他对我们严肃但却不失关爱。9）适当发挥，写出感受。 1.文体： 2.时态确定： 3.人称： 4.要点： Para. 1: Para. 2: 5.布局谋篇： 分—总结构安排。 对Lin Shan的 介绍描写. 总结全文，简要评价，并适当发挥，写出感受。 1）我的新的英语老师是一位很帅气的男士，名叫Lin Shan。 My new English teacher is a very handsome man ( who is ) called/ named Lin Shan. Lin Shan,my new English teacher, is a very handsome man. My new English teacher, Lin Shan,is a very handsome man. My new English teacher is called Lin Shan who is a very handsome man. My new English teacher is called Lin Shan . He is a very handsome man. 2）他中等身材。 He is of medium height/ build. He is neither too tall nor too short. My new English teacher is called Lin Shan. He is a very handsome man with medium height. 3）他总是戴着一副精致的眼镜。 He always wears a paire of fine/ delicate glasses. He always wears his fine/ delicate glasses. 4）他看上去很年轻。 He looks very young . He looks much /even younger than he is. He looks much /even younger than