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专八说明文 篇一：专八说明文 一.六分(outstanding)：对事件的复杂性的分析清楚有力；熟练驾驭有效写作的要素。a)在就某事件展开分析和阐述自己观点时摆出有洞察力的原因和/或有说服力的事例。b)结构清晰。c)对于语言(包括用词和句法多样性)有很好的掌握。d)文章完全符合标准书面英语规范(包括语法、用法和拼写规则)，但可能会有小错误。二.五分(strong)：对事件的复杂性有充分的分析；很好地掌握了有效写作的要素。a)阐述观点时能运用恰当有力的理由/或事例。b)结构较清晰。c)对于语言(包括用词和句法多样性)有良好的掌握。d)较好的掌握标准书面英语规范(包括语法、用法和拼写规则)，但可能会有小错误。三.四分(adequate)：对事件的复杂性有一定的分析；对写作的要素有一定的掌握。a)阐述观点时能举出与事件相关的理由/或事例。b)结构基本合理。c)对于语言(包括用词和句法)有一定的掌握，但句法缺乏多样性。d)对于标准书面英语的规范有一定掌握，但有一些错误。四.三分(limited)：对事件的复杂性有一定的分析；对写作的要素有一定的掌握，但有明显缺陷，一般 具备下列特征中的一项或几项：a)观点模糊或不充分。b)结构松散。 c)不善于举出与议题相关的理由或事例。d)语言不准确且/或句子缺乏多样性。e)在语法、用法或拼写上偶有错误或常有小错误。五.二分(seriously flawed)：在分析性写作技巧上表现出严重缺陷，一般具备下列特征中的一项或几项：a)观点不明确或未能充分展开。b)毫无结构可言。c)缺乏相关的理由或事例。d)在语言运用或句子结构上经常出现严重错误。e)在语法、用法或拼写上错误很多，影响文章表达。六.一分(fundamentally deficient)：在分析性写作技巧上有根本缺陷，一般具备下列特征中的一项或几 项：a)无法完整地叙述问题。b)在语言和句子结构上不断有严重错误。c)在语法、用法或拼写上有大量错误，严重影响文章表达。七零分：跑题、非英语写作、重抄原题等。八 NR：白卷。Advantages and Disadvantages of My Town Every place has its advantages and disadvantages, including my hometown. A newcomer to my town would find not only several things to enjoy, but also a few drawbacks. Among the good points of my town are the friendly people. The residents here are very kind and will make a new neighbor feel welcome. Also, my hometown is very convenient. Stores and businesses keep long hours and the public transportation is very good. Last but not least, there are many places to spend leisure time in my town. They range from cinemas and pubs to public parks. Whatever a newcomer抯 interests might be, I believe he would find something to enjoy in my town. Unfortunately, there are also a few things about my town that a new neighbor probably wouldn抰 like. For example, because it is a crowded place, it is often noisy here. Someone who is used to the peace of the countryside may be disturbed by the sound of traffic. In addition, life here is very fast-paced and competitive. Most people do not have many opportunities to just take it easy. A newcomer might find the pressure difficult to deal with.