山东省计算机会考基础题讲评.pptVIP

Dear teachers and students, I’m very glad to be here to make a speech. Our school is like our home, where we stay almost every day. So there’s no doubt that I’m very proud of our school. Not only has our school been well equipped with so much advanced equipment, but there is also harmonious atmosphere created by everyone. Furthermore, it’s our teachers’ devotion to teaching that makes us study better and get good grades. Thanks to our school, we have a brighter future. Our school has done a lot for us but what can we do to repay our school? It’s our responsibility to do something to make our school better and better. In my opinion, first of all we should respect the school rules and work harder so that we won’t let our teachers and parents down. Secondly, we should protect the environment. We should form a good habit of putting the rubbish into the dustbin. Besides, we are supposed to take an active part in the activities launched by school. Only in this way can we make our school more and more popular. Thank you for listening! * * * 作文讲评 Models in writing 27分：徐宫冬子27 26分：胡凌飞 孙源26 25分：刘岫 林霄 曹歆雨 王鑫 宫琪 李嫣然 24分：逄宗奇 顾莹莹 付笑楠 Models in writing 27分：徐宫冬子27 26分：胡凌飞 孙源26 25分：刘岫 林霄 曹歆雨 王鑫 宫琪 李嫣然 24分：逄宗奇 顾莹莹 付笑楠 27分：王欣然 潘小飞 26分：刘子琰 25分：曲艺，黄稷琛，肖玮，——， —— 24分：王雅琍，李璐琪，魏嘉诚， 李朝曦， 刘雪，于小超，贺博岩，孙小楠 Models in writing Models in writing 27分：王欣然 （补） 26分：刘子琰 25分：曲艺，黄稷琛，肖玮，——， —— 24分：王雅琍，李璐琪，魏嘉诚，李朝曦， 刘雪，于小超，贺博岩，孙小楠 The problems we should kill in writing 1.We should do something for our school . Because our school is among the best schools in this province. 2. The things mentioned above are that I am proud of. These are the reasons why I am proud of my school. The reason why …（句子）is that ….(句子) , because our school is among the best First （ly）， Second（ly）， 不用the first，the second Most students= most of the students Golden sentences 1. One of the reason why I am proud of it is that the