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* 本资料来自于资源最齐全的２１世纪教育网 * 本资料来自于资源最齐全的２１世纪教育网 * 本资料来自于资源最齐全的２１世纪教育网 * 本资料来自于资源最齐全的２１世纪教育网 * 本资料来自于资源最齐全的２１世纪教育网 * 本资料来自于资源最齐全的２１世纪教育网 重庆育才中学 How to Better a Piece of Writing 易冰灵 为了更好地开展2014年全民阅读活动，有关部门就如何为市民创造良好的阅读环境广泛征求意见，你班将举行一次英语主题班会来讨论这个话题。请你写一篇发言稿，提出自己的想法和建议。 要点提示: 1. 阅读的重要性。 2. 你的建议。（如建更多小型图书馆，经常性地 介绍好书等） 要求： 1. 词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 2014年中考书面表达 (15分) A piece of writing from a student(学生作文） Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is very important to us. It can makes us understand the world, and it can make us feel relaxing. I want to make more people like reading, so I have some good suggestion. We can build lots of small libraries in the city. If there are more new books, people are more interested in reading. We should keep the reading room quiet and clean. It is public place. You cant make sound or put rubbish on the ground. I hope my advices could be good . More people will like reading. Do you think it is a good piece of writing? Why or why not? Better the layout (布局) Better the grammar Better the vocabulary (词汇) Better the sentences Better the logic (逻辑) How can we make the writing better ? Better the layout (布局) How to make the writing better Step 1 A better layout can make the writing more clear. Basic layout基本结构 Paragraph 1 Paragraph 2 Paragraph 3 introduction 引入 details 细节 conclusion 总结 Para. 3 conclusion Para. 2 details Put the writing into a better layout. Para. 1 introduction Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is very important to us. It can makes us understand the world, and it can make us feel relaxing. I want to make more people like reading, so I have some good suggestion. We can build lots of small libraries in the city. If there are more new books, people are more interested in reading. We should keep the reading room quiet and clean. It is public place. You c