高中英语学考作文指导 - 副本.pptVIP

Page ? * Page ? * Page ? * Page ? * Page ? * 会考作文的要求： 作文总分_____ _____分钟写出____个词左右的文章 导致低分的主要原因 问题1： 句型结构混乱 问题2： 汉式英语 问题3： 缺乏高级词汇， 句式单一 问题4： 表达不连贯， 缺乏过渡语 对策：主干优先，添枝加叶 对策：用英语进行思维 对策：使用高级词汇、 丰富句式和语法结构 对策：使用恰当的连接词 主干优先，添枝加叶 第一步：找出句子主干 例句：那个淘气的男孩没关水龙头就跑了。 第二步：确定主干的相应词汇 第三步：翻译句子主干 第四步：添加修饰成分 男孩 跑了 boy , run away The boy ran away. 那个 男孩 跑了。 淘气的 没关水龙头就 The naughty boy ran away. The naughty boy ran away without turning off the water. 练习1： 穿红色羊毛衫的女孩是我们的班长。 The girl____________________________ is our monitress. 女孩 是 班长 (who is) in a red sweater 练习2： 她眼泪汪汪地离开了办公室。 She left the office. She left the office with tears in her eyes. 她 离开了 办公室 汉式英语 例句：有很多人捐了钱。 There were many people donated money.(?) There were many people who donated money. There were many people donating money. Many people donated money. 练习：有两个外国人将来我们学校参观。There are two foreigners will come to our school for a visit. (?) There are two foreigners who will come to our school for a visit. There are two foreigners coming to our school for a visit. Two foreigners will come to our school for a visit. 汉式英语 我们都是中国人。We all are Chinese. We are all Chinese. 汉式英语 你方便时来找我吧。 Come to see me when you are convenient. Come to see me when its convenient for you. √ × 我们有必要每天早上坚持说英语。We are necessary to keep on reading English every morning. （？） Its necessary for us to keep on reading English every morning. 汉式英语 五月十二号四川发生了大地震。 May 12 Sichuan happened a big earthquake. (?) A big earthquake happened in Sichuan on May 12. √ 问题三：缺乏高级词汇，句式单一 （一）较高级词汇的使用 原则2：短语优先 A new subway is being built in my hometown 。 原则1：多实少虚 a nice person generous,humorous, gentle,warm-hearted 原则3：弃旧取新 你的课引不起我的兴趣。 Im not interested in your lesson. Your lesson doesnt _____ _____ me. A new subway is _____ _________ in my hometown. under construction appeal to Exercises: 1.He spends all his spare time on computer games. He __