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Unit 6 When was it invented? 1.take photos Who ____ these amazing photos _____ by? 8.他们此刻不可能在图书馆，是吗？ _______________________________________ Part III How to make your articles perfect. 假定你叫张华，最近从报纸上得知美国某公司将在你家乡建一座工厂， 请给该公司写封电子邮件，要点如下： ﹡表示欢迎：有利于家乡的发展等 ﹡感到担忧: 造成环境污染等 ﹡希望了解有关环保措施及更多信息 （2010 安徽） Dear Sir or Madam, I am a middle school student. I know your company is going to set up a new factory in my hometown. It’s great, because many people can get jobs and their life will become rich. But I’m worried about the environment. Because the factory may pollute the river and the noise may make people feel unhappy. Of course, your factory may bring us a chance of developing our hometown, so many people are happy about it. Do you have some solutions to the problems? I’m looking forwards to hearing from you. Your faithfully, Zhang Hua 1.条理化：（统一性、连贯性、完整性） Dear Sir or Madam, I am a middle school student. I know your company is going to set up a new factory in my hometown. It’s great, because many people can get jobs and their life will become rich. 2.润色： ② 句子的润色 （连贯、层次分明、漂亮） Dear Sir or Madam, I am a middle school student. It’s great, because many people can get jobs and their life will be improved, at the same time, the factory may bring us a chance of developing our hometown, so many people are happy about it. Dear Sir or Madam, I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to a factory here in my hometown . It’s great, because many people can get jobs and their life will be improved. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown, so man