2012北京卷英语作文高考判卷评谓馕鲻.docxVIP

高考判卷感受今年我很荣幸的参加了北京市外语高考判卷工作，受老师委托，通过今天这样一个机会把判卷的感受和大家交流沟通一下，总的来说，判卷的标准还是比较严格的，一共200名老师进行判卷，其中有一半是大学老师，这也就意味着对学生作答的要求更加严格，试卷实行双评制, 两位教师的评分如果超过3分 要进行三评.通过这次亲临高考阅卷工作, 真正体会了高考的严肃和神圣.近几年的北京高考情景作文以图画式为主; 一般由四幅画组成的组图，同时给出一定的文字说明。题材主要涉及到学生熟悉或经历的日常生活。考查学生对图画内容的观察和理解，要求学生有条理，有重点，生动准确地把图画内容加工成书面语言。拿今年作文举例，今年我判的最高的作文是20分，最低的作文是0分，下面我们大家一起来看一下今年的作文。同样也是四幅图，我想和大家一起解读一下情景作文的评分细则,本人认为对高考英语写作非常有意义.本题总分20分，按五个档次给分。评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。评分应考虑：内容要点的完整性，上下文的连贯性，词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。拼写，标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑，英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。词数少有60，从总分中减去1分。二．内容要点：1.发现 2.询问 3.告诉路线 4.分别With the sun rising with a gentle breeze , I was jogging along the street when I saw a foreign couple talking with a city map .puzzle wore obviously on their face , it dawned on me that they must have been lost . The moment I talked to them ,I got to realize that they could not locate the place of tian tan . telling them how to discover the right spot they were heading for ,I also showed them how to step toward the temple of heaven . due to my introduction , they began to felt a sign of relief .With a sun rising the gentle breeze ,I was walking along the street when I Saw two foreigners standing on the street . How time flies ! it was soon that the bus pulled at the bus stop .it was obvious that they were going to leave .before leaving , I saw them off ,waving hand to them ,expressing my best hope to them . Short though the deed was , I felt proud and delighted ,for not only can I offer the helping hand to the needy people , but I have showed how polite and enthusiastic our Beijing people are . 他们的表情很迷惑的样子，我想到 他们肯定迷路了。 于是我走上前去，问他们的问题是什么。他们说不知道天坛在地图上标的那里，知道了这个情况后，我告诉他们如何找到天坛，并且，我告诉了他们的路线，看到他们松下一口气后，我非常的高兴。Seeing them have a sign of relief , I felt very delighted .I told them the way to get to temple of heaven A sign of relief 由于我没有事情，我之后一直把他们带到了公交车站，他们对于我的这个行为非常的感谢。 They thanked me greatly They appreciated me greatly Led them to the bus stop 不一会，车来了，soon , here came their bus .Saw them off They get