沃登编辑—英文医学论文稿件中常见问题分析幻灯片.ppt

下面是最常用的比较句型之一： The mean ALT of group 1 patients was significantly higher than that of Group 2 and 3 patients (p0.01). 如改为下句更简练。 The mean ALT level was higher in group 1 than in groups 2 and 3 (p0.01). 但比较的句子也可以不用带有than的句子，只用比较级，而后面用as compared to …。例如将上面的句子改为： The mean ALT of group 1 patients was significantly higher as compared to group 2 and 3 (p0.01). 这样的句子可在用了若干个带than的比较句子之后使用，换一个方式，免得太单调和重复。 国内作者常常写成如下句型： … and … of … group were …, …, respectively; … and … of … group were … and … These differences were statistically significant (p0.05). 实际上将(p0.05)附在前面那一句的后面，也就表明有显著性差异，不必写后面那句话了。 (结果) Because the radioactivity was too strong, all the measures for preventing radiation injury were failure. (由于放射性太强，所有预防辐射损伤的措施都失败了) Because the radioactivity was too strong, all the measures for preventing radiation injury failed. [结果] All the 22 children had tachycardia before CBP and fell in average by 45?13 bpm 4h after CBP. [22例儿童持续血液净化(CBP)前均存在心动过速，CBP 4h后心率平均下降了45?13次/分。] All the 22 children had tachycardia before CBP and their heart rate fell in average by 45?13 bpm 4h after CBP. [结果] After 72-hour culture, the shape of plaques still remained to be very small. (经72小时培养，蚀斑仍然很小。) After 72-hour culture, the plaques were still very small (the plaques remained very small). [结果] It showed no significant difference in viral copy numbers between the 2 groups before being treated (p0.05), but significant difference between HCMV hepatitis and normal infants have been shown (p0.001) [治疗前两组间病毒拷贝数未显示显著性差异(p0.05)，但HCMV肝炎和正常婴儿之间显示有显著性差异 (p0.001)。] There was no significant difference in the number of copies of viral DNA between the 2 groups before treatment (p0.05), but there was significant difference between the cases with HCMV hepatitis and healthy infants (p0.001). On electroscopy, the microthrombosis in LT group was obviously less than that in SAP group (P0.05). On electron microscopy, the microthromb