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作文阅卷要求 1. 分5档阅卷,每档5分,如缺少一到两个要点, 降档给分,不能写成条文式. 2. 大错扣一分:如时态,动词,句子结构等错误.小错扣半分:如大小写,标点符号,名词,形容词等错误 3. 单词数多或者少了超过20个,扣两分.书写及卷面不工整扣两分 4. 格式错误扣两分到三分 常见的过渡词语 根据所给材料作文 现在很多中学生出国留学,环球时报说澳大利亚有50%的签证给了高中生.假设你叫李华,请给某编辑写信,明确表明赞成还是反对.字数100到120. 赞成:与中国相比,国外教育有很多优点,还可以培养学生多方面的能力……… 反对:与中国相比,国外教育存在很多问题,还有过早留学给学生经济,精神,学习上造成很多负面影响……. Some Topics 1.禽流感(bird flu)和非典(SARS) 2.伊拉克战争(Iraqi War, terrorism) 3.为什么上大学（go to university) 4.早恋(puppy love) BYE - BYE ! * * WELOME TO OUR CLASS 看图写作文 An Example One day after school, Xiao Ming turned on a tap and splashed water here and there. At this moment, Xiao Nong hapened to pass by. Xiao Ming splashed him with water and made him all wet. Xiao Ming ran away without turning off the tap. When Xiao Nong saw this, he went over and turned off the water. He angry because he thinks water shouldn’t be wasted. Then he went home and wrote a notice. He put it up on the wall near the tap. After some time, Xiao Ming went back and looked the notice. He felt sorry for what he had done. 2 加was 3 thought 4 which reads “Save water”. 5 saw 1. 改为happened Three points 1.First（先）: 要先打草稿,然后在誊写到答卷 2.Less（少）: 少用长句子和语法复杂的句子 3.All（全）: 要把要点写全 in a word, in short, as you know 总结类 thanks to, because, due to, as a result 因果类 on the contrary, on the other hand, while 对比类 for example, such as, in one’s opinion 例证类 especially, indeed, at least 强调类 first, next, then, shortly after, finally 时序类 even, besides, what’s more 递进类 but, however, nevertheless 转折类 and, also, not only…but also, as well as 并列类 One possible version: Dear editor I don’t think it is good to send teenagers abroad to study. Compared with China’s education, foreign education has many problems. Some foreign schools are not as good as those of our country in teaching quality. In those schools, students can’t learn more, and waste a lot of money, which is a heavy burden to their families. Teenagers are too young to take care of themselves