2009高考英语写作预测系列讲座（一）网络教育.docVIP

2009高考英语写作预测系列讲座（一） 网络教育 本讲座是写一篇关于因特网的文章，介绍因特网的使用的利与弊。根据写作要求，首先你需要认真审题，确定文章的体裁，时态和段落。然后，你要列出提纲，注意要点要全。最后，适当扩充要点，形成一篇完整的文章。本文主要采用对比法和列举法。因此要注意使用表示对比和列举的关联词。 写作指导： 一：审题 本文的体裁属议论文，应以一般现在时为主，三段式为宜。第一段简述因特网的使用既有优点又有缺点。第二段列举因特网使用的利与弊。第三段写个人体会。 二：列提纲 Outline of the passage: HEADLINE Advantages and disadvantages of the use of the Internet Paragraph 1 to put forward the topic: the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet Paragraph 2 to list the advantages and disadvantages of the use of the Intertnet. favorable points：updated information ; convenience;get educated;shop； unfavorable points：computer viruses; have access to; violence and sex Paragraph 3 to give personal opinions 三: 所涉及到本单元的词汇及表示列举和转折的关联词. access; breakdown;via ;fantastic; disadvantages; as well; on the one hand ,on the other hand;to begin with;; besides; what’s more;what’s worse 四:扩充要点,连词成句。 学生习作 Advantages and disadvantages of the use of the Internet As①the development of the②computers ,the Internet has become more and more popular. As a fanstastic information expressway, however, it has both advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, the Internet has many favorable points. To begin with, it provide③ plenty of updated information. Beside④,it brings much convenience to our daily life as well. We can also do almost everything on line by just staying at home. Not only we can⑤ get educated, but also we can shop via the Internet. But on the other hand, the Internet also has many unfavorable points. At first⑥,computer viruses may get into our computers and cause a breakdown. What’s worse, some children may have access to the scene of violence and sex, which will do harm for⑦ them. As far as I know, we should use the Internet properly. While we enjoy the advantages it brings, we should not forget the bad effects bringing⑧by it. 教师点评： 本篇习作符合议论文的形式。要点全面，条理清晰，合理使用了过渡词汇however, on the one hand, on the other hand, to begin with ,besides, not only…but also ;what’s worse ;as far as I know等, 使文章有机地衔接在一起, 在语言的运