高三英语 复习专题 书面表达课件.pptVIP

书面表达 ----高三复习专题 南京市二模书面表达 请你根据下面这幅漫画用英语写一篇短文。短文内容应该包括以下三个方面： 1.描述这幅漫画的内容 2.是否同意他们的教育方式，并 陈述理由 3.对家庭教育提出建议 As can be seen in the cartoon, the young couple educate their child in different ways. What are preventing us from getting better grades in our writing? 1. 1. to my opinion as/in my point of view 2. When educate their children, some parents are too strick with them. 3. Others are agree that children can grow up for free. 4. As far as I am considered, parents are unnecessary to spoil their children. 2. Exercise 1: 1. 这能确保有特殊才华学生进入一流大学。 2. 这能鼓励中学重视学生的全面发展 。 3. poor hand-writing What can help us get better grades? 第四档(好)：(16-20分) 完成了试题规定的任务。 1. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。 2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 3. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 4. 应用简单的语句间的衔接手段，使全文结构紧凑，内容较连贯。 达到了预期的写作目的。 第四档(好)：(16-20分) 完成了试题规定的任务。 1. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。 2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 3. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 4. 应用简单的语句间的衔接手段，使全文结构紧凑，内容较连贯。 达到了预期的写作目的。 1. 有效使用衔接手段，使文章紧凑 Improve the following sentences using some transitional words. The father shouldn’t be so strict with his child. The mother shouldn’t spoil the child any more. They should use appropriate methods to educate their child . Exercise 2: 起 目前、当前、现在 ___________ __________ _________ 首先，起初 ___________ __________________ _________________ 当提到…，当考虑到…. _______________ ______________ 承 并列、递进 _________ __________ ________________ ______________ 转 弱转折、弱对比 ______________ ______________ 强转折、强对比 ______________ ______________ ________________ 坏中有好 ____________ 每况愈下_______________ 合 结果 __________ ___________ ______________ 总之、综上所述 ________ ___________ _____________ 就我而言、在我看来 ___________________ ___________ __________ 2. 运用较多复杂语法结构和高级词汇 1. Moreover, it will have bad impact on children both mentally and physically. (Fan Wenyuan) 2. In my sight, family education enjoys a high level of importance in every child’s life. (Hu Dining) 3. Were I the father, I would never do like him. (from Class 9)