四级作文评分标准+范文(选课+自行车).pptVIP

四级作文的写作标准 一般来说，考生在四级写作中应当做到： １． 语法，拼写，标点正确，用词恰当 ２． 遵循文章的特定文体格式 ３． 合理组织文章结构，使内容统一，连贯 ４． 根据写作目的和特定读者，恰当选用语言 四级作文评分标准 四级作文试题总分仍占１５％。阅卷标准分五等：２分，５分，８分，１１分及１４分。 １４分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 １１分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯。但有少量语言错误。 ８分：基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯。语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 ５分：基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 ２分：条理不清，思路紊乱。语言支离破碎或大部分局自均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 题目：Bicycles―― An Important Means of Transport in China 提纲：（1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及 （2）和汽车的比较 （3）自行车在中国的前途 Score: 14 Paragraph 1 Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people -- man and woman, old and young -- ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles”. 注：1. 第一句总写，第二句和第三句分写，最后总写。 2. During the rush hour 介词短语结构开头。 3. 破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。 Paragraph 2 Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride. Second, riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution. Though cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive. They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air. Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car. Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents. 注：1. Compared with cars 分词结构开头。 2. be superior to/ be inferior to 优于/ 低于 3. thirst, second, third 英语语言有层次感，信号词 4. cheap 便宜，最好用inexpensive 5. be good for health 对健康有好处（万能理由） 6. Moreover 表示递进 Paragraph 3 In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. Since China is a developing country and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions. It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time. 注：promising 有前途的 Score: 8 Bicycle is an important means of transport in China. The important reason of it is the ec