火灾捐款.ppt

What happened in the picture? 一。时态错误 二。介词错误 in March 2nd On Spring Festival In that day 三。冠词错误 Spring Festival school world 四。动词的过去式和过去分词 Hold---held---held Take---took---taken Catch---caught---caught Hear---heard---heard Destroy---destroyed---destroyed 五。捐钱 Donate money/contribute money/raise money 六。学生会主席 president/chairman of the Student Union Student leader 1.We should help people who in need/trouble. The money we donated up to 2000 yuan. 2.The president of the Student Union named Wang Bo will on behalf of all the teachers and students send his money to Zhang Honglin’s parents’hands. 2.The president of the Student Union named Wang Bo will be on behalf of all the teachers and students to send his money to Zhang Honglin’s parents. 3.During the Spring Festival, Zhang Honglin’s house had suffered a fire. Correcting the mistakes A charity which raised money for Zhang Honglin’s family was held in our school on March 2nd. When we were celebrating the Spring Festival, a fire disaster broke out in Zhang’s house. As a result of this disaster, they suffered a lot and led a difficult life. Out of sympathy, we held this charity. Everyone in our school put money in a special box. The money we donated up to 2000 yuan. At last, Wang Bo, the chairman of the Student Union, who was on behalf of the whole teachers and students presented the money to Zhang’s family. Hearing their thankful word, I think my action make sense. In the mean while, I acknowledge the old saying: Give others a rose; leave the fragrance in hand. A charity which raised money for Zhang Honglin’s family was held in our school on March 2nd. When we were celebrating the Spring Festival, a fire broke out in Zhang’s house. As a result of this disaster, they suffered a lot and led a difficult life. Out of sympathy, we held this charity. Everyone in our school put money in a special box. The money we donated added up to 2000 yuan. At last, Wang Bo, chairman of the Student Union, who was on behalf of the whol