effective sentences 好的句子.ppt

整句强调 The speaker asked the audience what they thought were the main problems the city government was facing, and how these problems should or could be solved, and he eagerly waited for answers. No answer came. The plot is confusing, the characters are very queer people, and the dialogue is hard to understand. A strange film. The poet was born poor, and poor he remained all his life. He is not an ordinary scholar in this field; he is an authority. Government of the people, by the people, for the people shall not perish from the earth. Placing Repeating important words The use of verbs in the active voice Subordination VARIETY It is also important to be able to write in various sentence forms. Although the form of a sentence is usually decided by what the writer wants to say, if all the sentence in a paragraph or a passage are written in similar structures, the reader will feel bored. Therefore, effective writing also requires sentence variety. 史记《80后传》 人有80后者，初从文，未及义务教育之免费,不得高等学校之分配，适值扩招，过五关，斩六将，硕博相继，寒窗数载，二十四乃成,负债十万。觅生计，背井离乡，南下深圳，披星戴月，秉烛达旦，十年无休，蓄十万。楼市暴涨，无栖处，购房金不足首付，遂投股市，翌年缩至万余，抑郁成疾，入院一周,倾其所有病无愈，因欠费被逐院门。寻医保,不合大病之规，拒付，无奈带病还。友怜之,赠三鹿奶粉一包，鸡蛋数枚。翌日，卒。 I am Wang Jun. I am thirteen. I am a student in No. 1 Middle School. I get up at 6:00 everyday. I go to school at 7:30. I study Chinese, English, Mathematics, geography and history. I like these courses. I like English most. Tourism is a booming business in China. However, some people worry that too many tourists may bring harm to the environment, while others dont think so. What is your opinion? Write a composition of about 200 words within 35mins on the following topic: ? Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? ? YOU ARE TO WRITE IN THREE PARTS: In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organi