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时态要用对。passage和lecture里面表示作者说一类含义的统统用一般现在时。

文章整体结构要完整并符合要求。

前面要有总起的introductorysentence，该句的主要是概括reading和lecture有观点冲突。

【Thereadingpassage’sauthorisconvincedtherewereseveralreasonswhytheriseoffactoriesoccurredinEngland,yettheprofessordisagreesthattheywerethemainreasonwhyfactoriesbecamesuccessful】

中间的正文展开要按照lecture的顺序，一点一点逐一与reading对应地展开。tobeginwith,inaddition,asafinalpoint,toconclude

先说reading的观点，再说原因；然后是转折，说lecture的观点，并说原因。

最后的结尾可要可不要。

开头和结尾段首尾呼应比如disagree，后面有refutation

段内一方有多个理由或者观点需要展开时，要有逻辑，比如在claim/declare等词前面加上first/next/also等。

主要语言的丰富性，同一种意思用多种不同的表达方式，并且，千万不要照抄passage的原文。

比如，theriseoffactoriesbegan=theriseoffactoriesoccurred

spreadthroughouttheworld=becamesuccessful

thosewithoutanyland=landlesspeople

havetheabilitytodosth.=havethecapabilitytodosth.

=beabletodosth.

表示认为的：theauthorclaims/believes/notes/argues/pointsout/states/insists/mentions/asserts/maintains/declares/isconvincedthat或者thepointbroughtup引用：citesthat

表示lecturer反对的用法：

thelecturercountersbyinsistingthat……=thelecturercountersthepointsmadebythereading,whoseauthorthinksthat……=thelecturerdisagreesandclaimsthat=Toargueagainstthereading’sassertionthat……=incontrasttothereading’sargumentthat……,theprofessorsays=torespondtothereading’sclaimthat…，theprofessorsays…

onthecontrary=incontrast

一些比较好的用法：

laythefoundationof

theprevalenceofsth.

ascribeto归因于

enable使得【比make要地道些】

承认：thelectureracknowledgesthat

boththereadingandthelecturementionthat……

developedmusclesintheirstomach.Toargueagainstthereading’sassertionthat……

sb.beresponsibleforsth.=blamesb.forsth.

模板：

Introduction

Whilethereadingassertsthat_________________________________________,

thelecturerprovidesevidence/reasonscontrarytothisassertionandbelieves_________________________________________________________________.

Body1

First,inrespon