人教版九年级下册英语精品教学课件 UnIT 2 写作能力提升练.pptVIP

**写作实践话题写作常见错误呈现实战演练UNIT2写作能力提升练英语课上，老师要求大家谈一谈家规。假如你是王燕，请你根据以下提示和要求，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的家规，并在课堂上和同学们分享。提示：1.Whatrulesdoyouhaveinyourfamily?2.Whatdoyouthinkoftheserules?3.…要求：1.包含对所有问题的回答，可适当发挥；2.不少于60词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。MyhomerulesTherearelotsofrulesatmyhome.____________________________________________________［审题指导］1.体裁：说明文2.话题：介绍家规3.人称：第一人称4.时态：一般现在时［思路构建］MyhomerulesTherearelotsofrulesatmyhome.Inthemorning,Ican’tgetuplate.ThenIhavetomakemybed.Afterbreakfast,Ineedtodothedishessometimes.FromMondaytoFriday,Ican’twatchTVorplaycomputergamesintheevening.Icanrelaxonweekends,butIcan’tgooutatnight.Myparentsalwayssaytheserulesareveryimportanttome.Ithinktheserulesarestrictbutusefultome.［精彩范文］1.思路清晰，采用“总—分—总”三段式结构；2.lotsof,getup,haveto,makeone’sbed,dothedishes,from...to,onweekends,beimportantto等短语的正确运用，展示了作者的扎实的基本功；3.文中Therebe结构以及Myparentsalwayssay...和Ithink...主从复合句的运用成为文章的加分点。高分点评：下面句子均有1-2处错误，请找出并写出正确的句子。1.Therearelotofrulesinmyfamily. ______________________________________2.Shehavetomakeherbedinthemorning. ___________________________________________Therearelotsof/alotofrulesinmyfamily.Shehastomakeherbedinthemorning.3.Afterbreakfast,heneedsdothedishessometimes. ________________________________________________4.Ican’twatchTVandplaycomputergamesatnight. ______________________________________________Afterbreakfast,heneedstodothedishessometimes.IcantwatchTVorplaycomputergamesatnight.5.Myparentssaytheserulesisveryimportanttome. _______________________________________________Myparentssaytheserulesareveryimportanttome.假如你所在的学校本学期提供校车接送服务。请根据下列提示，用英语向乘坐校车的同学介绍一下乘坐校车要遵守的规则。词数70词左右。要点：_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________