高中英语写作专题17 读后续写16大提分句式+对点精练（原卷版）.docxVIP

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专题17读后续写16大提分句式+对点精练

句式1：With+复合结构”又称为“with结构”

Atthethoughtofthefactthatshedidn’thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxious?withherheartbeatingfastandherfeetsweating.一想到自己没有幸运的钉子，她就更加焦虑，心跳加速，脚出汗。

Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammatestightly?withtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie?激动而高兴，紧紧地拥抱着队友，泪水从脸上滑落。

1.那女孩张大了嘴巴，打开了她的礼物盒。(with+宾语+adj.open)

2.女孩心怦怦直跳（beatwildly），打开（unwrap）了她的礼物盒。(with+宾语+分词)

3.?他的妻子伤心极了，眼里满是泪水（fulloftears/filledwithtears）

4.那个人躺在地上，双手颤抖着。（ontheground,tremble）

Thegirlunwrappedthegiftbox?withhermouthwideopen.

Thegirlunwrappedthegiftbox?withherheartbeatingwildly.

Hiswifewasextremelysad,?witheyesfulloftears?/?withtearsrollingdownherface

句式2?：并列谓语，细化动作?A,BandC

Whentheannouncersaid“Nextupisthegirls’100-meterhurdles”,Jodie?took?adeepbreath?andwalked?tothestartinglineslowly.当播音员说“接下来是女子100米栏”时，朱迪深吸一口气，慢慢地走到起跑线上。

句式3?：句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子用于表示动作伴随，原因或结果

Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,?waitingfor?herturn?nervouslyandanxiously.Jodie穿着她崭新的钉子，紧张不安地等待着轮到她。

句式4?巧用生动的无灵主语：?Astrong/intensesenseof?delight?tookholdof?me?themoment?Iheardthenews.

Relieved(=breathingasighofrelief),?Ericthankedthemanandswitchedthefrequencyback,“Mac,helpiscoming!”Buttherewasnoresponse.埃里克松了一口气，向那个人表示感谢，并将频率调回，“麦克，救命来了！”但没有回应。

句式5?：情感形容词+句子

Thrilledandjoyful,?Jodiehuggedherteammatestightlywithtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie?激动而高兴，紧紧地拥抱着队友，泪水从脸上滑落。

句式6：巧用时间状语，表达情节

Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,Ericheardanothervoice.ItwasSlideMountainRescuewhofinallycame!好像经历了一个世纪之后，埃里克听到了另一个声音。终于来了，是雪山救援队！

句式7：.“一……就……”的表达法：assoonas,hardly/scarcely…when…,nosooner…than…,themoment/minute/second/instant,immediately/instantly/directly,on/upon+n.doing。

Themomenttheannouncerannounced“Number11,JodieNymble,takesthegoldforRiversideMiddleSchool”,thunderouscheersandlaughterfilledtheHiddenPark.?当播音员宣布“11号，Jod