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**话题写作常见错误呈现写作实践Module9GreatinventionsModule9写作能力提升练目录CONTENTS01话题写作常见错误呈现02写作实践03实战演练下面句子均有1～2处错误，请找出并写出正确的句子。1.Itisgreatinventionfortheoldpeople.?2.Howaboutcomeheretohaveacupofcoffee？?3.Itwasteourtimeandisbadforourhealthy.?Itisagreatinventionfortheoldpeople.Howaboutcomingheretohaveacupofcoffee？Itwastesourtimeandisbadforourhealth.4.Doyouinterestedinit？?Areyouinterestedinit？假设12岁的孩子Sam为生病的爷爷发明了不漏水、不怕

摔的杯子——KangarooCup。为了使更多的老人受益，这种

杯子被批量生产和出售。假如你是某店的店长，请你根据下

面所给的信息，为店里的这款产品写一则广告，让更多的人

了解KangarooCup并来你店购买。［审题指导］1.体裁：广告2.人称：以第三人称为主3.时态：以一般现在时为主［精彩范文］TheKangarooCupisagreatinventionforoldandsick

people.Itwasinventedbya12-year-oldboy.Heinventeditfor

hisgrandfather.Howaboutcomingtomyshoptobuysuchcups

foryourgrandparents？TheKangarooCupiscomfortabletoholdwiththreelegs，

soitcanbewidelyusedindailylife.Itismadeofplastic，soit

isnoteasilybroken.Besides，itisalmostimpossibleforwater

inthecuptospill.Withoutdoubt，thecupisaverygoodproduct.Itcostsonly

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?要求：不少于80词。Look！Myinventionisasolar

backpack.Itisusedforoutdooractivitiessuchasclimbingand

travelling.Thebackpacklooksbiggerthancommonones，

butinfactitisn’theavy.Anditisbigenoughtoholdmany

things.What’smore，thebackpackcancollectasmuch

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