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**写作任务思路点拨写作实践UNIT7Teenagersshouldbeallowedtochoosetheirownclothes.UNIT7写作能力提升练目录CONTENTS01写作任务02思路点拨03写作实践假如你叫李华。你的父母为了能让你更好地学习，制定

了一些规则，其中包括周末不能出去和朋友玩。你对此规则

不是很赞同。请根据以下提示，写一篇短文表达你的观点和

想法。要点提示：1.青少年应该和同龄人多交流；2.周末适当出去玩，放松一下；3.朋友可以相互鼓励努力学习，共同进步。［谋篇布局］理清文章要素，构建文章结构。myparentsmadesomerulesformetogoouttoplaywithmyfriendson

weekendscommunicatemorewiththeirpeersmakemefeel

relaxedencourageeachothertostudyhardandmake

progresstogether［巧妙衔接］在文章过渡时，使用however可使过渡自然。在陈述观点时

也可用and，also，moreover(而且，此外)，inaddition(除此

之外；另外)等起承上启下作用的词语。［连句成篇］Inordertoletmestudybetter，myparentsmadesome

rulesforme.Idon’tagreewithoneofthem，whichdoesn’t

allowmetogoouttoplaywithmyfriendsonweekends，

becausetheythinkit’sawasteoftime.However，Ithinkteenagersshouldcommunicatemorewith

theirpeers.Moreover，goingouttoplayforapropertimecan

makemefeelrelaxed.Inaddition，friendscanencourageeach

othertostudyhardandmakeprogresstogether.AsfarasIamconcerned，thisruleshouldbechanged

properly.IfI’mallowedtogoouttoplaywithmyfriendson

weekends，Icandoevenbetterinmystudies.最近你和你的父母就“青少年应不应该被允许在家使用

智能手机”进行了讨论。你认为应该允许青少年在家使用智

能手机，但是你的父母却坚决反对。请你以“Should

teenagersbeallowedtousesmartphonesathome？”为题写一

篇英语短文，介绍一下你们各自的观点。(不少于70词)Shouldteenagersbeallowedtousesmartphonesathome？?Recently，Ihadadiscussionwithmyparentsabout

whetherteenagersshouldbeallowedtousesmartphonesat

home.Myparentsthinkthatteenagersshouldspendmoretime

doingtheirhomeworkorreviewingwhatthey’velearnedin

class.Usingsmartphonesathomewillmakethemwastealot

oftime.What’smore，teenagerscangetaddictedtoplaying

videogames.However，Idon’tagreewiththem.Ithink

teenagersshouldbeallowedtousesmartphonesathomebecauseitisconvenientforustocontactourclassmatesorteacherswhenweha