译林版九年级上册英语精品教学课件 Unit 3 写作能力提升练.pptVIP

**Unit3Teenageproblems写作能力提升练【写作任务】进入初三以后，同学们都在为梦想而奋斗，同时也会遇到一些问题，如阳光中学的Lucy经常熬夜做作业，上课昏昏欲睡；考试得低分，感觉不自信；父母太在意分数，使她感觉有压力。假如你是Mr.Friend，请你从以下三个角度给她写一封90词左右的信，为她支个招吧！1.制订作业计划或向同学和老师寻求帮助；2.利用颜色疗法增强自信(举例并给出原因)；3.尝试与父母沟通或培养业余爱好来缓解压力。DearLucy,Thankyouverymuchfortellingmeaboutyourproblems.Youoftenstayuptodoyourhomework.____________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Mr.Friend【写作指导】①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：一般现在时；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；第二步，针对对方的问题依次提出建议；第三步，表达“希望这些建议对对方有帮助”的愿望。【遣词造句】1.你经常熬夜做作业。Youoften_______________yourhomework.2.我认为你应该列一个家庭作业清单。Ithink________________________yourhomework.stayuptodoyoushouldmakealistof3.然后算出你需要多少时间来完成所有的作业。Then___________howmuchtime___________________allyourhomework.4.为什么不多用橙色呢？_____________________________thecolourorangemore?workoutyouneedtofinishWhynotuse/Whydon’tyouuse5.每次考试后，你的父母都太在意你的分数，所以你总是感到有压力。Yourparents_________________aboutyour__________aftereachexam,soyoualwaysfeel___________.6.我希望这些建议对你有帮助。Ihopethese________________________you.caretoomuchmarksstressedsuggestionsarehelpfulto【范文赏析】DearLucy,Thankyouverymuchfortellingmeaboutyourproblems.Youoftenstayuptodoyourhomework.Youoftenfeelsleepyinclass.Ithinkyoushouldmakealistofyourhomework.1Thenworkouthowmuchtimeyouneedtofinishallyourhomework.Andyoucanalsoaskyourteachersandclassmatesforhelp.Youalsogetlowmarksintheexams.Youalwaysdon’tfeelconfident.Whynotusethecolourorangemore?2Itcancheeryouup.Yourparentscaretoomuchaboutyourmarksaftereachexam,soyoualwaysfeelstressed.Whatabouttryingtotalkwiththem?3Ofcourse,youcandevelopsomehobbiessuchasswimming,playingbasketballandrunning.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbehelpfultoyou.1Yours,Mr.Friend亮点词汇①stayup