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叙述背景(学校英文报展开XX讨论)+点明自己的身

份+简单表达自己的观点

Nowadays,thereisanincreasinglyheateddebate

on“ShouldCommunityServicebeaRequirement

forGraduation?Frommyperspective,theanswer

isyes.

译林版选择性必修四第三单元CareersandSkills的单元主课文

Ifyouwereaskedthequestion,“Doyouworktoliveorlivetowork?,

用疑问的方式抛出“需要讨论的问题”，引发读者的思考

whatwouldyouranswerbe?Somemightsaythatweworkbecausewe

观点1认为人必须工作简单陈述原因，因为人需要工作来保证经济独立

haveto,notleastbecauseweneedthesalarythatenablesustobe

financiallyindependent.Itiscertainlytruethatmostofusdojointhe

顺延以上的观点，继续深人讨论，表示大多数人完成学业以后就需要工作，说明工作的“强制性”

labourforceonceourstudiesarecompleted.Indeed,itcouldbeargued

总结观点,我们的教育是为我们的工作生活做准备

thatoureducationisgearedtowardspreparingusforalifeofwork,

However,earningalivingisbynomeanstheonlyreasonwhywework-

欲抑先扬，通过“however”点出真正的观点

thereareotherimportantreasonsthatmotivateustoentertheworldof

观点本身，还有其他重要的原因促使我们进入工作的世界

work.

Haveyoueverencounteredsomestudentswhoexcelat

solvingacademicproblemsbutstrugglewith

interpersonalskillsinyourlife?Thisphenomenonoften

stemsfromalackofpracticalexperience,suchas

engagingincommunityservice.Therefore,Istrongly

advocatethatcommunityserviceshouldbeamandatory

requirementforgraduation.

“用VR游览中国”开头:通过刻画具体的“社区服务”体验来引人“社

区服务”的优点，从而引出我们的正文。

PutonapairofVRgoggles,grabthe

Stepintothebustlingstreetsofour

controller,andyoullseethemajestic

community,lendahelpinghandtothosein

scrollofsplendidlandscapesunrollbefore