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PracticalWriting---EvaluateandPolishWhatcontributetoagoodcomposition?GoodcompositionContentAppearanceLanguageCohesionPart1.Evaluate假如你是李华，你的好朋友Jane来信诉说每次放假返校她都出现疲惫，焦虑，学习效率低等症状，所以想让你就如何克服假期综合症(Post-holidaySyndrome)给出一些建议。内容包括：1.表示理解和问候；2.假期综合症产生的原因及症状；3.克服假期综合症的建议。体裁Genre写作对象Target人称Person时态Tense写作目的Purpose要点Keypoints建议信好朋友Jane第一人称+第二人称一般现在时就如何克服假期综合症给出一些建议。1.表示理解和问候；2.假期综合症产生的原因及症状；3.克服假期综合症的建议。StructureandGradingcriteriaP1:background:每次放假返校她状态不佳2’+writingpurpose写信给出克服假期综合症的建议3’P2:Reasonandsymptom:假期作息不规律；疲惫/焦虑/学习效率低3’+Suggestion:调整作息/积极运动/保持乐观积极的心态3’P3:hopesandwishes:希望采纳建议+成功调整状态2’(得分含语言分)handwriting:1’structure:1’GroupworkDiscussandevaluatetheassignedcompositionbasedontherequirementsinyourworksheet.(3minsforgroupdiscussion)Passage1Passage2Passage3Passage4Problemsinyourcompositions衔接Cohesion1.没有过渡语，要点之间过渡生硬卷面Appearance1.书写不规范2.段落空格位置不规范语言Language1.时态使用不当2.句与句逻辑联系不紧密3.从句使用不当4.句型句式单一内容Content1.首段没有点明体裁2.没有明显关键词，写作要点不突出3.遗漏要点4.没有思路，无法提出切题建议5.盲目套用过往背记内容，针对性不够强Appearanceisimportantbutpeopleoftenpaymoreattentiontowhat’sinside.外表虽然重要人们更多关注内在Advancedexpressionscanmakeyourwritingstandoutfromothers’.亮点使你的作文从千万篇作文中脱颖而出.Part2.Polish2.1Polishyourlanguage2.1.1CommonsentencepatternsofsuggestionlettersPara1Imsorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublefittinginyournewschool.Suchproblemsarequitenormal.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpful.Knowingthatyouhavedifficultyindoing…..,Iamdelighted/pleased/elated/i?le?t?d/toofferyousomeconstructivesuggestionsabout/concerning……,hopingtheycanbeofgreatbenefit/use(=bebeneficial/useful).Wordsfailtoexpressmyconcernwhen…..I’mwritingto…2.1Polishyourlanguage2.1.1CommonsentencepatternsofsuggestionlettersPara2Youcouldconsidertakingthefollowingstepstoimprovethesituation.Attheverybeginning,youaresupposedtodo…sothatyoucan....AsfarasIamconc