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留学套磁邮件写作误区盘点 这样写英文邮件等于“自杀” 留学申请有时候需要写套磁邮件，大多数中国学生连中文邮件格式和用语都搞不清楚，更别说英文邮件了。小站教育编辑为大家盘点留学套磁邮件写作误区，童靴们在写作邮件时一定要注意，千万别把自己作死了。 奇怪的语气 英文当中文讲 很多咱中国童鞋写的邮件都是拿中文里的语气直接翻译过来的，写在英文里就很奇怪。举个例子： I applied for the Summer Analyst position at your companys New York office and still haven’t gotten any notice from you. Your company has been my dream employer for years,so it would be a pity if I didn’t have a chance to interview with your company. 小编读到这儿就乐了，立刻能脑补一个画面：一个中国童鞋一脸虔诚的说“我真的特别喜欢你们公司，如果没能跟你们公司面试真的是太遗憾了!”这话中文听着多有诚意啊，但直接翻译成英文就觉得超级无敌囧。如果你想表达相似的意思，不妨试试这么说： I wanted to follow-up with you because I have not yet heard back regarding my application status. Your company is my first choice, so I would greatly appreciate the opportunity to interview with your team. 这样说比较符合美国的书面邮件说法，而且显得很淡定。下次记得用用看。命令的语气 很多同学在邮件里附上自己简历之后会扔一句“Please review my resume”，感觉跟大老板扔了一沓儿材料在小编脸上似的。下次咱换个客气一点的语气好吗?比如这样： I would greatly appreciate any advice you have on refining my resume for opportunities in this field. 还经常看到有童鞋这样写： “I can’t thank you enough for your mentorship and guidance. Let’s stay in touch!”脑补的画面就是被领导拍着肩说’年轻人以后跟哥混啊!’换成这样说是不是好很多： Thanks again for your mentorship and guidance. I’ll be sure to keep you apprised of any developments on my end, and I look forward to staying in touch. 那些要命的语法错误 这里说的都不是什么虚拟语气啊那些高深的，而是最最最普通的语法错误，拎个小学生过来都能挑出来一箩筐那种。先别狡辩，咱们一起来看个例子，截自一封小编收到的真实的学生来信： Hi Hong: I found your contact information from alumni directory. Please allow me introducing myself firstly. My name is XXX, MSF student from University of YYY. I will graduate from my Master degree from University of YYY with major in Finance. I`m seeking forentry-level position in finance industry. May I know whether your company has opening positions or has plan to recruit in your group? Thanks for your time. I`m looking forward to hear from you soon. 咋一看觉得还行啊，没那么糟啊，明白他什么意思，也挺言简意赅的。 小编可以很负责任的告诉你，大多数美国的HR 或者职场人收到这封邮件的人都会直接忽略的。原因就是那些无谓的语法错误。 第一句话就直接吐血了。首先，先不说这句话有没有必要说，正确的语法应该是：Please allow me to introduce myself first. 有同学不好意思的挠挠头，托