2022年人教版高中英语选择性必修第三册同步课件Unit 4 Adversity and courage Section Ⅳ 写作指导.pptxVIP

Unit 4　Adversity and courage;Section Ⅳ　写作指导;夯基提能作业;写作方法指导;写作指导 概括故事内容并发表评论，需要用自己的话概述故事的情节，必要时点出主题和主旨。概括情节时不要遗漏要点，但要略去不必要的细节，然后针对故事人物、情节等发表自己的观点。 故事的主题和主旨有时隐藏在情节中，写作时学生要找到关键词和主题句，用自己的话归纳段落大意和文章主旨。同时应注意要点之间的衔接，注意使用衔接词。写作时常采用如下步骤： (1)先概括。仔细阅读所给的材料，概述主要内容，即who，what，where，when，why和how等信息。 (2)后评论。针对所读内容表达自己的看法并说明原因。; 常用表达 1．This article introduces the story of… 2．She/He started… 3．In this process, they… 4．As far as I’m concerned… 5．When it comes to… 6．It seems to me that… ; 写作模板 This article introduces the story of ________. Under the influence of ________, ________ had a strong interest in ________, so ________ started ________. Before that, they made a lot of preparations to ________, such as ________ so on. Of course, all of these have paid off ________. In this process, they _______________. In my opinion ________. ;精品展示 阅读下面短文，概述文章主要内容，并发表自己的看法。词数80左右。 The first father and daughter on Mount Gagarmatha (also as Qomolangma) When she was young, Chhamji Sherpa lived in the Himalayas of Nepal, where the climate is cold and there are many mountains covered with snow. While her father, Dendi, and other mountaineers had been exploring Gagarmatha, Chhamji’s interest and curiosity were growing. ; They looked closely at her ability to cope with harsh natural conditions. Of course, her father had expected that Chhamji would encounter many difficulties in climbing the mountain. Due to the sudden rise of altitude and the sharp change of pressure, generally speaking novice climbers will have altitude response. ;It took two months for the father and daughter to get used to the weather, climb ice and rocks, and get familiar with climbing equipment. Strong winds and thin air make it extremely difficult to breathe. However, they did not fear, and continued to climb. On their way from base camp to No. 1 camp, they encountered the most exciting journey, including the deadly Khumbu Glacier. No one ever thought that such an ordinary girl, in the later days, successfully broke two Guinness