专八改错3免费下载.pdfVIP

英语专业八级改错练习题及答案解析 (一 ) About half of the infant and maternal deaths in devel oping countries could be avoided if women had used family planning methods to prevent high risk ____1____ pregnancies, according to a report publishing recently by the Johns Hopking ____2____ University. The report indicates that 5.6 million infant deaths and 2,000,000 maternal Deaths could be prevented this year if women chose to have theirs children ____3____ within the safest years with ad equate intervals among births and limited their ____4____ families to moderate size. This amounts to about half of the 9.8 million infant and 370.000 maternal deaths in d eveloping countries, excluded China, estimated for this year by ____5____ the United Nations Childrens Fund and the US Centers for Disease Control respectably. China was exclud ed because very few births occur in the high ____6____ risk categories. The report says that evidences from around the world shows the risk of ____7____ maternal or infant ill and d eath is the highest in four specific types of ____8_____ pregnancy; pregnancies before the mother is 18 year ol d; those after the ____9____ mother is 35 years old; pregnancies after four births; and those l esser than ____10____ two years apart. 参考答案及解析 : 1 将 had used 改为 used 。 因为此句是虚拟语气，表示与现在事实相反，故条件从句中应使用一般过去时。例如： Many woul d be wise if they did not think themselves wise. 许多人原本会成为聪明人－如果 他们不自以为聪明的话。 2 将 publishing 改为 published report 和 publish 时逻辑动宾关系， 故应使用 publish 的过去分词短语来修饰 report 。例如： Any discovery that we may make, however small, will remain acquired knowl edge. 任何可能 的发现，不管多么微不足道，都将成为知识宝库中的一部分。 3 将 theirs 改为 their 4 将 among 改为 between 在两次怀孕期间留出足够的间隔时间，故用 between 。 5 将过去分词 excluded 改为介词 excluding 。 excluding 意为 不包括 ... 6 将 respectably 改为 respectively respectively 意为 分别地 ，符合句子的意思。