(完整)小学五年级英语各单元作文(上册).docVIP

1. My English Teacher Miss Tang is my English teacher. She ’ s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的 题目是 “我的英 语老师 ”，是一篇介 绍人物的作文。小作者开 门见山，直接点 题，首先介 绍了英 语老师的姓名，然后 逐一介 绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英 语水平、上 课特点以及 师生情感等。 小朋友 们在写作文 时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的 词 [组 ]，以免 写出一些 错句子。写作 时要注意意思 连贯 、语句通 顺、标点正确、书写清晰、 规范等。 2. My Days of the week I ’ m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’ clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I  ’ clock every don’ t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的 题目是 “我的一周 ”，小作者没有 说一些空 话，而是从自己的 亲身经历 写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所 为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流 畅。 小朋友 们写作文 时要注意人称及 谓语动词 的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的 实际，写自己身 边熟悉的事情。 3. My Favourite Food Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It ’ s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It ’ s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much. How about you? What ’ s your favourite food? 【要领点评】 My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章， 小作者并不是 简单地列 举出自己最喜 欢的每一种食物，而是有 详有略地 进行介绍。整篇文章用 词准确、 语言流 畅、没有 语法错误 。另外，文章中出现了一些生 词，可 见小作者是用心 查字典了。 4. I can help do housework I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I ’ m in Class Three, Grade Five. I ’ m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too? 【要 领点评】 本篇作文的 题目是 “我可以帮助做家 务 ”，作者主要叙述自己在 家帮助做的事情， 介绍自己的名字， 所在年 级及在家能做的家 务，