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中考书面表达强化提高教学设计 Teaching Aims: how to write a good composition, or how to make your composition better so as to get a good mark in a examination. 一、导入T: In this class we are going to talk about how to write a good composition, or how to make your composition better so as to get a good mark in a examination especially in the High School Entrance Examination. 1.写一句完整的句子:句子的完整 句子的连贯 句子的简洁 句子的多样化 2.设计一个好的段落:主题句 扩展句 结论句 二、分析句子的种类：简单句；并列句；符合句 1.简单句（略） 2.并列句 用连词/副词 (and, but , so, for, or , not only…but also, either…or, neither…nor, while, both…and, however, therefore…) 1) Li Ming is 18 years old and he is a student in No.1 Middle School. 2)Hurry up or you’ll be late for school. 3)I must go now, for my sister is waiting for me. 练习: 翻译下列句子 1.)他虽然生病了, 但是还是去上学了。 He was ill;however,/but yet he went to school. Although/Though he was ill, he went to school. 2.)韩红不但歌唱得好, 而且舞也跳得好. Han Hong can not only sing well, but also dance well. Not only does Han Hong sing well, but also she dances well. 复合句 判断下列句子属于哪种复合句 1.) The letter says that they are leaving on Friday. 2) This is the very dictionary that I am looking for. 3) As time went on, Einstein’s theory proved to be correct. 练习: 改正下面句子, 使之成为正确的一句话 It was raining hard, they could not work in the field. 1. )It was raining hard；they could not work in the field. 2. )It was raining hard, so they could not work in the field. 3. )It was raining so hard that they could not work in the field. 4. )They could not work in the field because it was raining hard. 三、句子的连贯 连贯性的要求是：句子前后之间要有照应，有衔接，思想的表达应该有序，清楚．句子与句子之间的过渡要符合逻辑，不能造成歧义或矛盾． 四、句子的简洁 １．文字简洁. 2.避免使用同义词重复.(如下面的这些句子, 划线部分重复, 应删掉). 五、段落(设计一个好的段落) 1.主题句： 写好主题句, 有两条原则 1.）主题句要明确, 句中须有一个词,词组,或从句让读者一目了然本段的确切主题, 明确本段的重点或观点. 2.）主题句要概括, 它陈述你要说明的重点和观点,句中必须包含有可扩展主题的词,词组或从句. 他应该是你将进一步表明你的态度和看法的概括. 同时, 主题句有利于控制作者本人的主题的扩展. 拓展句 1.）单一性: 一个段落只说明一个问题, 讲述一件事, 扩展句必须紧紧地围绕着主题句, 不偏离中心思想. 2.）连贯性: 段落中各扩展句前后衔接,条理清楚,合乎逻辑, 使读者很容易抓住段落的中心思想. 结论句 结论句并非必不可少, 但它能起到以下的作用: (1)表示段落的结束 (2)总结要点,与主题句