《雅思大作文写作》.pptVIP

写作练习practice Many people use distance-learning programs( study material post, TV, Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefits of attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Common mistakes 1. enter college/university → receive university education 2. knowledge that is useful for work → job-related knowledge 3. learn knowledge and skills → acquire/obtain knowledge and skills 4. 职业技术学院？ → occupational technique school/ vocational school 5. advanced education → higher /tertiary education 5 Star sentences ☆☆☆☆☆ Anyone can memorize facts and get on-job training, but not everyone can think and analyze. So While universities play a role in training people for the workforce, they primarily function as a place for training the mind. What most companies and workforces need are not robots, but creative people who can contribute ideas. 改错 1. With the development of technology in recent years increasing number of individuals prefer to self-learning at home instead of attending school. 2. In addition, the students are lack of a studying atmosphere. 3. So classes learning is suitable since students meet face to face rather than distance-learning which only have sound or image communicating. 4. Some individuals held that study at home cannot give students the advantages as well as learning in university. 5. However, if you study in Internet or material post, you can manage your schedule on you own and spend more time to consolidate your knowledge, which is more efficient and intelligent means. Model Answer Distance learning is a relatively recent phenomenon and consequently it is somewhat controversial. With good reason, many people question whether technology can really change how we can learn. Others, however, make a convincing argument that classroom-based learning has its limitations. Considering both sides, it is clear that there is value in both approaches.