高中英语Module1 Basketball写作园地_人物传记外研版选修7.docVIP

PAGE 高中英语 Module 1 Basketball 写作园地-人物传记 [感悟范文] 刘翔，作为前奥运会110米跨栏冠军，世界纪录保持者，因伤退出北京奥运会，留下遗憾，尽管如此，刘翔克服重重压力复出，夺得2010年广州亚运会冠军。请根据下面的介绍写一篇短文。 姓名：Liu Xiang 生日：1983.7.13 出生地：上海 项目：the mens 110 meters hurdles 辉煌战绩 2004年，以12秒91的成绩夺得110米跨栏奥运会冠军，成为中国第一人。 2006年，在the super grand prix meeting in Lausanne中以12秒88打破世界纪录。 2010年，获得广州亚运会110米跨栏冠军。 精神 顽强拼搏，坚定信念 注意：1.短文词数不少于120； 2．内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯； 3．书写须清晰、工整。 [范文] Liu Xiang, born on July 13,1983 in Shanghai, is a wellknown athlete in track and field in the world. Liu Xiang won the mens 110 meters hurdle final and got the gold medal in the Athens 2004 Olympic Games. Therefore, he became the first Chinese man to win an Olympic track and field title. He set a world record of 12.88 seconds in the mens 110 meters hurdles at a super grand prix meeting in Lausanne, Switzerland in 2006. Liu Xiang has returned as a king and got the champion of the Asian Games in 2010. He overcame the pressure as well as the pain of his injury. It is his determined spirit that helps him stand again. It takes great pains to have it. To do this, we must establish a firm faith in our actions and be ready to devote ourselves to them. Around us，there are quite a few people with this intense determination and spirit. Liu Xiang sets a good example for us to follow. [技法讨论] 1．体裁：本文是人物传记，属于记叙文体。主要写名人或伟人的生平事迹。因此要抓住人物的出生年月、主要事迹、给人们的启示等来写。 2．格式：句子时态在上下文中要有相关性、连续性，要与表达内容一致。就本文而言，要用一般过去时。用第三人称。 3．结构：首先介绍刘翔的生平，然后介绍刘翔的主要事迹，最后介绍刘翔带给我们的启示。 黄金表达 1．出生在 be born in/on 2．成为中国第一人 become the first Chinese man 3．创世界纪录 set a world record of 4．克服压力 overcome the pressure 5．致力于，献身于 devote oneself to 6．为……树立榜样 set a good example for 亮点分析： 1．这篇参考范文要点齐全，语句通顺，行文连贯，各种句型使用恰当。适量运用了一些较为高级的词汇和较复杂句式，起到了锦上添花的效果。如使用了强调句型“It is his determined spirit that helps him stand again.”以及“To do this，we must establish a firm faith in our actions and be ready to devote ourselves to them.”等，这些句式的使用，使得文章语言多姿多彩，令人耳目一新。 2．亮点句式回放 (1)Liu Xiang has returned as a king and got the champion of the Asian Games in 2010.