四级听力讲义（彭飞）.doc

课程铸就品质 服务感动学员 四级写作 彭飞 CET_4 Writing—考试任务 CET_4 Writing—评分标准 2分 ——条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误， 且多数为严重错误。 5分 ——基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8分 ——基本切题。有些地方表达思想不清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误 相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。（多数句子有错误，中式英语较多，思 路基本清晰） 11分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。（用词较 简单但无误，句型使用无误但不新颖，思路清晰，让人有清爽的感觉） 14分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本无语言错误，仅有 个别小错。（词汇难度系数大，句型使用无误，思路清晰，逻辑结构连贯） CET_4 Writing—评分标准 It was the morning of April 6th, 2003. At about 7:30, I went to school by bike as usual. It was a rainy day and the road was slippery. On the way, I noticed a boy riding in front of me, talking loudly with his friends. He didn’t wear a raincoat; instead he held an umbrella in one hand, and rode with another hand. （14分） I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the road. Then, with a big sound, the accident happened. The red car stopped suddenly on the road so that the driver of following car couldn’t respond immediately. The back of the red car was badly damaged, but fortunately there was no people injured in this accident.（11分） The yellow car involved in the accident was running at a high speed along the right-hand when it happened. Hardly it reached the junction when it cracked with a truck running from another direction. There was no time for the drivers to change the directions.(8分） 内容不跑题即可，注意： 1.不要妄图以情动人； 2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。 结构上牢记总分总： 先写主题句(Topic Sentence)，再写分论点， 最后写总结句(Conclusion)。 语言最重要，往往使评分产生重大差异，语言要模仿和包装。 CET_4 Writing—课程安排 一：考试任务评分标准 二：语言雕琢：词语和句型 三：文章类型行文思路 四：2014作文话题预测 语言雕琢：词语和句型 首先保证无语法错误 1 、主谓一致 It not only relieves the burden on the big city, but also provide a much better environment for people to live in.One serious problem human beings are faced with are how to use our natural resources economically. 2、 连接词用法不当 Although an opportunity is rare, but we must be ready to seize it.when people try to attain high speed by using cars and buses, and this creates new problems.Some were doing mo