中考英语作文满分五要素.pptVIP

中考英语作文满分五要素 满分作文五要素是哪五要素？ 1.要点 2.结构 3.逻辑 4.语法 5.亮点 1.要点 要点要全面，懂得详略得当 Mary在学校参加了一个Buddy Club，从那以后，她改变了很多。请结合下面所给的提示，写一篇英语短文。 In the past Now Personalities shy, quiet, get nervous easily brave, outgoing... Hobbies reading reading, singing... Abilities good at dancing, singing 2.结构 结构清晰，一般为“总--分--总”结构 以议论文为例： 第一段：开门见山，表明观点； 第二段：论证，举例说明； 第三段：提出希望或建议。 3.逻辑（过度词） 表顺序关系：first of all, secondly, then, finally, in the end, at last; 表并列补充关系：what is more, besides, furthermore, in addition; 表转折对比关系：however, on the contrary, but; Although+clause; 表因果关系：because, as, so, thus, therefore, as a result 换一种关系表达：in other words; 举例说明：For example, for instance, such as; 表达自己的观点：as far as I know, in my opinion; 表总结：in short, in a word, in clusion, in summary. 4.语法 避免出现语法错误，如时态误用、单词拼写错误、主谓不一致等。 例子：1. We live more and more comfortable. (comfortably) 2. We can get many information by reading newspapers (much) 3. There is many programs on TV. (are) 5.亮点 注意词汇、短语、句型的多样性，如表示漂亮的词有：beautiful, good-looking, attractive, charming, catching... 满分作文范文 为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。 要点：1.慎重交友； 2.预先报警； 3.安全饮食； 4.其他（1-2点） 注意：1.内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥； 2.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 3.词数80左右文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：be careful, on line, danger, call...for, go bad How to Keep Safe? As teenagers we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember its dangerous to swim in the river. In short, safety must come first! Thank you.