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CHERYL XIAMEN NEWORIENTAL SCHOOL IELTS INTERNATIONAL LEARNING CENTRE Synonyms Chart = bar chart Different = various Post-school qualifications = further qualifications Proportion = share / percentage Men and women = male and female = people of different gender Who held them = holding them / reached them / with them Opening: The various levels of further qualifications in Australia and the share of male and female holding them in 1999 are revealed in the bar chart. Body 1: It is evident that there were significant difference in further education received in terms of different gender. The smallest gender difference is at the bachelor degree, where 55% of students were female, compared with 45% of male. Another case that women outnumbered men is at undergraduate diploma, with 65% and 35% respectively。 Body 2: By contrast, the greatest gap of different gender is at skilled vocational diploma, where 90% of people who acquired the diploma were male, while only 10% of them were female. Similarly, men accounted for clearly more than their female counterparts in higher degrees, like master’s degree and postgraduate diploma, where male took up 70% and 60% of all respectively. Ending: Overall, men were more than women in both lower skilled vocational diploma and higher graduate diploma and master degrees, while female prevailed in undergraduate diploma and bachelor’s degree. Opening: The chart gives information about post-school qualifications in terms of the different levels of further education reached by men and women in Australia in 1999. Body 1: We can see immediately that there were substantial differences in the proportion of men and women at different levels. The biggest gender difference is at the lowest post-school level, where 90% of those who held a skilled vocational diploma were men, compared with only 10% of women. By contrast, more women held undergraduate diplomas (70%) and slightl