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如何提高学生的书面表达能力 宁波七中 楼小燕 新课标对于学生的写作要求： 一．根据写作要求收集，准备素材。 二．能独立起草短文，短信等，并根据老师的要求进行修改。 三．能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系。 四．能简单描述人和事物。 五．能根据所给的图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。 2011年宁波市英语中考评分标准 本大题总分为15分，按五个档次给分 第一档（14—15分）能写明全部要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。 第二档（11—13分）能写明大部分要点，语言有少量错误，行文比较连贯，表达比较清楚。 第三档（8—10分）能写明部分要点，语言有较多错误，行文不太连贯，但尚能表达意思。 第四档（5—7分）能写明少部分或个别要点，语言错误较多，只有个别句子可读、可看懂。 第五档（0—4分）基本上没有写出内容要点，语言错误多，只有一些词汇堆积, 不知所云。 ? 去年英语满分作文。 Dear headmaster, I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions. First, I hope our school will open the library more often. And our school will organize more out-class activities and give us more time for sports. It will be good for our health. And I also hope our school will organize fewer exams. We are all stressed out now. I hope our teachers will make classes more interesting. They will talk less but more clearly in class. And I hope our teachers will finish classes on time. They will give us less homework. So that we can spend more time doing something that we are interested in. Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thank you for reading my letter. Yours sincerely Liu Bo 如何谋篇布局 开头：开门见山 主体：枝繁叶茂 结尾：画龙点睛 开头：开门见山 1）Junk food is bad for our health. 2）I think it is unnecessary for middle school students to take the mobile phones to school. 3）you asked me how to improve English, here are some tips. 主体：枝繁叶茂 确定文章所需用的时态。 仔细审题，不遗留要点。 主题句清楚、支撑句丰富，并能紧扣主题句。 I hope our school will give us more time for sports. Because it can keep us healthy. What’s more, it is helpful for our study. 注意句子与句子之间的连接，过渡要自然。 如果表达类似的意思，尽量用不同的句式，增强句子的表现力。 I like playing basketball. I also enjoy playing tennis. As for movies, action movies are my favorite. 结尾：画龙点睛 1) 可用简短的句子来结束文章，注意与文章主题的呼应，避免照搬前面的原话。 2) 画龙点睛，最好能对主体有所提升。如对未来的展望、号召正确的做法等。 对程度较好学生的写作能力的提升 1. 多使用一些过渡性词语，会使得文章结构严密，增强说服力，感染力以保持行文的流畅。 2.