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reasons for reading English textbooks to learn English to open our minds to make our life more colourful things you’ve learned in English textbooks Wonderful things in the world Cultures around the world your favourite famous person or place in English textbooks, and the reasons … 亲爱的同学， 初中三年的英语学习中， 《牛津初中英语》教材给我们提供了大量寓教于乐、生动活泼的阅读素材，伴随我们成长。请以“English Textbooks are Good Friends”为题写一篇短文参加学校的英语作文竞赛。(2014年盐城市英语中考题) 注意事项：1. 90词左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；表达清 楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3. 文章必须包括表格中所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。 English Textbooks are Good Friends English textbooks play an important part in our study of English. _______________________________________________________ Version 1: English textbooks play an important part in our study of English. They can help us learn English well. It can also help open our minds and make our school life colorful. We’ve learned many wonderful things in the world in our textbooks. We also learnt a lot about cultures around the world. My favorite person is Spud Webb. I’ve learned a lot from him. 评分标准： A.20—18分 涵盖所有内容要点，结构清晰，内容连贯，运用多种句式和语法结构，基本无语法错误。 B.17—14分 涵盖大部分要点，内容基本连贯，语言少量错误。 C.13—9分 只能运用简单句表达，语言有较多错误，但尚能答意。 D.4—6分 能写出几个要点，但语言错误较多，影响了意思表达。 E.0—3分 白卷或文不对题，错误百出，不知所云。 评分：等级_______理由______评分人______ Version 2: English textbooks play an important part in our study of English. They are good materials for us to learn English well. They can not only open our minds but also make our school life colourful. We’ve learned many wonderful things in the world in our textbooks, which help us get a better understanding of different cultures around the world and grow into an excellent person. Some famous people we’ve learned affect us a lot. My favorite one is Audrey Hepburn, a great American successful actress, who devoted much of her time and money to charity. I’ve learned a lot from her. 评分：等级_______理由______评分人______ enough content good organization fine language