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此次考试的作文题目为Online shopping，是一个考生们相当熟悉的话题，这也沿袭了四级考试贴近学生生活的特点，相信考生一定会觉得有话可说。　　从题材上来看，此次作文属于校园生活类，题材上属于议论文，命题类型是现象解释型，这与2006年新题型(学生自主选课)，2007年12月(该选什么样的课程)以及2009年6月(博物馆免费)是同一类型的，考生考前若能掌握了写作模板，写好这篇文章应该不难。主要写作思路如下：　　第一段应该是现象引入段，主要描述现象，引起话题;表现较为典型的一个方面;　　进一步阐述现象。　　第二段是说明原因段，主要承上启下,解释这一现象的原因一;原因二;原因三;　　重申观点，总结上述观点。　　第三段是总结观点段，主要讲述导致的结果;作者的态度;原因一;原因二;总结全文。　　下面是文都四六级精品图书《大学英语四级考试三层突破——写作·完形·翻译》中“现象解释型”的模板，请同学们对照一下：　　第一段：Nowadays, there exists a public controversy concerning the issue of引出现象.What amazes us most is典型的一个方面.It is true that进一步阐述现象.　　第二段：Many reasons account for 这一现象The main reason is原因一.What is more, 原因二. Thirdly, 原因三.　　第三段：As a result,总结上述观点.Considering all these, 讲述导致结果及作者态度.For one thing, 原因一. For another, 原因二.In conclusion,总结全文.Sentence (1) Minor Supporting Sentence (1) Minor Supporting Sentence (1) Major Supporting Sentence (2) Minor Supporting Sentence (2) Minor Supporting Sentence (2) Concluding Sentence 3： 主题句 要求： 完整、清楚、具体 结构： topic+ controlling idea e.g A first impression is not always a reliable basis for judgment . There are three advantages to air travel speed, comfort, and thrills. Chinese families have been undergoing many changes. There are many reasons explaining the situation shown in the chart. The Internet had developed fast these years and entirely influences people’s life. 实践： Trying to Be a Good University Student 1: 做合格大学生的必要性。 2：做合格大学生的必备条件（从德、智、体等方面谈） 3：我打算怎样做 Good Heath 1: Importance of good health 2: Ways to keep fit 3: My own practice 4: 扩展句的写作 思路 whyexplain howhow 写作手法 举例 列举 对比 因果 Please write a short paragraph based on the topic sentence given below 1: Diligence is the key factor of success. Diligence is the key factor of success. It is known that successful people are often diligent ones no matter how high their IQ is. Moreover, diligence can make a fool wise and a poor man rich. Therefore, diligence makes 2: Smoking is harmful to people’s health. Smoking is harmful to people’s health. Firstly, medical science