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Presentation (1) 写作专题——写物记叙文 【范文欣赏】 My hometown My hometown is an international metropolis, with a population of twenty-three million. My hometown is famous for its beautiful sightseeing. The Bund attracts an increasing number of tourists home and abroad every year. All of them want to have a glimpse of this cosmopolitan (国际性的) city. These years has seen great changes taking place in Shanghai. High-rises spring up on both banks of the Huangpu River. Shanghai has undergone an unprecedented (前所未有的) economic boom over the past few years. I think my hometown will be much more beautiful in the future. I love it. (96 words) After you read the sample writing, there are some questions for you to think about: How many parts can the sample writing divided into? There is one topic sentence in each paragraph, can you find them? How did the author support his main idea in each paragraph? After answering the questions above, please complete the following outline: Introduction: _____________________________________________________________ Main body: _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ a. _____________________________________________________________________ b. _____________________________________________________________________ Conclusion: ______________________________________________________________ Read the sample reading again and think about one question: Is there anything can be improved in the writing? 【写物记叙文】：以写景状物为主的记叙文，主要是通过描写自然环境来抒发作者对人或事物的热爱。在写景状物时，要把握“三多”，即“多观察”，“多比较”，“多思考”。“多观察”就是要抓住景和物的特征，细致新颖地加以描述。“多比较”就是要找到它的独到之处。“多思考”就是要做到寓情于景，将情与景自然交融。 写景状物的记叙文要注意以下几点： 选定描写顺序。 --- vertical order (bottom to top, top to bottom; head to toe, toe to head) --- horizontal order (left to right, right to left) --- depth order (inside to outside, outside to inside) --- circular order (clockwise, counterclockwise; east to west, west to east) --- near to far 观察景物特征。要分清景物类