2014年6月英语四六级作文汇总分析及点评.doc

2014年6月英语四级作文汇总分析及点评 四级写作题目一： Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your hometown. What is the place would you show him or her and why? 四级写作题目二： Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your campus. What is the place would you show him or her and why? 四级写作题目三： Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your China. What is the place would you show him or her and why? 与去年的图画作文模式不同，今年又重新回到了话题作文的形式，并且所给话题也是考生非常熟悉的，很容易展开思路。更令人惊奇的是今年的作文虽然有三个话题，但是话题设定的背景信息是趋同的，都是说外国朋友要来中国或来你的家乡或来你的学校，让你介绍一下中国/家乡/学校的特色，目的还是为了推介我们本土的文化特色，看来出题人是越来越看重中国传统文化的弘扬了。去年的翻译题当中就出现了一系列的对中国传统文化的介绍，像中餐，中国结，茶文化，中国园林，中秋等等。所以说，文化题材，特别是有关中国文化特色的题材要成为以后大家复习的重点内容。以后备考四六级的同学一定要多联系这个文化题材的翻译和写作。 【参考范文】 The Cherry Avenue If Im the guide of my foreign friends visit to our campus, I will choose the Cherry Avenue as our first destination. As the name implies, the Cherry Avenue is lined with hundreds of neatly-placed cherry blossom trees. It is about 200 meters long and a major scenic spot in our campus. In spring when the cherry trees bloom, the flowers are so dense that looking from a distance, it seems as if the road were surrounded by pink-hued clouds. Especially when there is a breeze, petals of cherry blossoms flutter and fall gently like a drizzle. Such breath-taking scene will put visitors into a kind of trance. Whats more special is the buildings along the avenue. Built in early 1900s, they are now called cherry blossom castle. Theyve witnessed the history of our school and even our country. You can learn a lot about our school there. In a word, a tour to the Cherry Avenue is both an amazing sight-seeing and a great opportunity to know about the culture of our school. 【点评】 本次四级作文一反以往的图片题形式，改为情境式话题作文，可能让准备好图片题写作的同学有点措手不及。不过话题贴近生活，要求介绍大学校园的某个地方，即一篇介绍性的短文，难度不大，只要避免语法错误即可保证得分。想要博出彩拿高分，可以在词汇的丰富性上下功夫，避免同样的词多次出现。 【参考范文2】 Guilin – A Beautiful City in China In China, theres a saying that The landscape of Guilin tops that of any other place under heaven. In light of this, I will rec