高考英语书面表达高分突破.ppt

高考英语书面表达高分突破 18-03-2011 高分作文特点 要点齐全，紧扣主题，用词面宽，句式多变，有自己的思想 考场作文步骤 1. 确定并划出三个信息点 2. 选材: 熟悉，规范，有新意 3. 确定时态基调 4. 草稿或提纲：重点词汇，句式（简单句，并列句，复合句，疑问句，否定句），连接词语，语态，分段，要点等 5. 卷面非常整洁，书写非常认真 6. 仔细检查：单词拼写，标点符号，连接词语，句子成分，动词使用等。 “三段论”（出题可能性：35%）作文高分要点 每段都从topic（一句）到support（2—3句） Topic P1 1. …think that … should…. 2. …think that there are several good points/advantages with… 即：1. …认为…应该… 2. … 认为…有优势 （think 可用believe, insist, suggest, would say等替换） P2 However, in …’s opinion/view point/point of view, it is necessary /reasonable/wise /essential for…to do… P3 In my eyes/For my own part/As far as I am concerned, 1. there is a good/no/little/hardly any reason for … to do… 2. I have enough reasons to say… Support 1.正反论证：如果这样做, ……; However, 如果不这样做, …… 2. 举例论证：for example 3. 数据、名言、科学结论等 Just as … once said,…. According to (the result of) a recent sentific research,…. Scientists have found out that…. 书信类（出题可能性：60%）作文高分要点 一、内涵：信件、e-mail、留言、口头或书面通知，甚至是书信加“三段论”。 二、书信的六种常见目的： 感谢 2. 道歉 3. 寻求帮助、信息 4. 推荐建议 5. 投诉、抱怨 6. 祝贺 每一种至少准备2—3个句型 揉合使用 如：某教授不能如约做讲座 感谢、道歉、建议 If you have any problem, please don’t hesitate to contact me whenever it is necessary. /at….(phone number) 三、写作思路（举例） (一）. 询求帮助 P1. 1. 问候对方，介绍自己 How are you? /How are you feeling? / How are you doing these days? / Is everything going on well with you nowadays? / How is everything going? Does everything go well with you? How are you getting along with everything? I’m…from… 2. 清晰表达询求帮助（general) I’m writing to ask you for help with…. I wonder if you could do me a favour by giving me some suggestions on …. P2 (每个点一到两句） 1. 你要干什么/你的困惑，困难，问题 As you know, the college entrance examination is approaching. However, I’m still very poor at my English. 2. 提出具体请求 So I need your suggestions badly on how to improve it in such a short time, especially grammar and writing skills. 3. Why him/her? 为什么找他、她帮助 I know you’ve been teaching high school students in China