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智 课 网 雅 思 备 考 资 料 雅思写作中 需避免的十种开头 万事开头难，雅思写作对于同学来说开头也算是一大难项。许多同 学认为雅思作文评分标准和开头以及结尾有很大关联性。雅思写作万能 模板便成为了众多学生的救命稻草，甚至生搬硬套。这对于自身的雅思 成绩是没有任何好处的。因此，我们需要了解需要避免的十种开头有哪 些。 需规避雅思写作开头一：中式英文 人见人晕(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆☆) 典型失败案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily…… Topic 2- The population problem The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there. Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world? I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things…… Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”. 需规避雅思写作开头二：废 话连篇不知所云(喷血指数：☆☆☆)这也是在雅思作文评分标准中最忌讳 的地方。 典型失败案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married? This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married…… 修改方案：开门见山 直奔主题 In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married. Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真题) Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life. Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important! 需规避雅思写作开头三 ：观点模糊 态度暧昧(喷血指数：☆☆☆) 典型失败案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married? I think this topic is very hard