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* 假如你是李萌，家住北京，你的表妹家住在杭州。春节时你想利用假期到表妹家住一个月，然后再返回北京。写信告诉表妹你的计划： 1.春节旅游高峰期，不一定能够买到打折机票。全价飞机票比较贵，火车提速后比较方便，所以选择坐火车从北京到杭州； 2.同表妹在杭州火车站见面； 3.一个月后乘火车返回北京； 题目要求 作文训练1 4.最后，想听听表妹的意见。 注意：1.词数120~150词； 2.不能逐点翻译，需要适当发挥； 3.格式已给出。 写作批阅 Dear cousin, How are you doing these days？Whenever I think of the holidays we’ll spend together,I feel excited.I’ve decided to go to Hangzhou by train rather than by air.I had planned to take plane there,but the problem is that during the Spring Festival holidays,there is no guarantee that I can get a discount.At the same time, the train has speeded up,and it’s more convenient to take a train. Concerned the above matters, I decide to take TRAIN Z9 that arrives at 8∶30 the next morning.When am in Hangzhou,I’d like you to meet me at the station. And I’d also like you to be my guide and then we can have a good time together.And one month later,before the new term begins,I’ll go back home by train again. What about your opinion?I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Yours, Li Meng 教师点评 1.How are you doing these days？中的doing应改为going, 因为How are you going？才表示“你近来咋样？”的意思。 2.I had planned to take plane there句中的take后加上冠词a。若用by时才不加冠词，即by plane。 3.Concerned the above matters中的concerned改为concerning。因为concerning是介词，意为“考虑到”，符合句子。  经典句式 1.Whenever I think of the holidays we’ll spend together,I feel excited. 2....,there is no guarantee that I can get a discount. 3.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. 题目要求 假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Ms.Lynn要来中国发