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My view on part-time jobs（题目中的实词都需要大写） ??????Nowadays，a great many of college students do part-time jobs .people have different opinions about it .Some people hold the view that it is favorable for college student to do some part-time jobs .others（首字母大写） disagree with that. （这两种对立的观点最好用转折连词连接起来） ????? In my opinion ,college students should do some part-time jobs .First, taking part in（动词使用不当）some part-time jobs can help college students make their own living .There are a amount of students living a hard life .For example ,some students go on their study by earning money（some students pay off their tuition by …） . Second, they can get some working experiences from jobs .As students ,they rarely do some other things except studying .? Third , college students will(could) have (aquire) chances to make friends with others .There is no doubt that we all need more friends . ?????In a word,I?agree that college students should do some part-time jobs .They? will benifit a lot from it .(结尾段过于简单) 此文约7分 思想性单薄，语言过于简单，几乎没有任何有难度的词汇和语法。 急需多背范文中经典例句，尽快提高写作水平 Writing Directions:For fhis part ,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short eassy on the topic of Waste Sorting . You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 目前许多人扔垃圾时不分类 由此带来的问题 提倡垃圾分类的意义 Waste Sorting By now, many people in china are still throwing away the rubbish in the same place. They awalys ignore the differences of rubbishes. So it takes some problems.（此段中的前两句话只有中国人能明白，表意不清！） As we know ,some rubbish aren’t useless , which can be recycled or reused , such as plastics and papers. If we mix all the rubbish together , we hardly to separte them （此句严重错误，竟然没有谓语动词）, it’s （指代不明）not only waste time,but also waste resourse（严重错误使用，动词连击！）. Worse still , it can add to the difficulty and cost of waste treatment. Last but not the least , more rubbishes can against （严重错误，没有动词）our living conditions. It’s a right time we should take actions to solve those problems. In our dairy life , if we waete sorting , t