二次作文评讲.pptVIP

Writing Assignment TASK 2 Topic Should teachers and parents use punishment in child education? 布局谋篇 第一段（引言段）首先指出成人应该帮助孩子如何区分是非，以及惩罚可以是一种教育手段，然后指出我们应合理适度的运用惩罚。 第二段（主体段）谈论如何良好的使用惩罚，以及滥用惩罚所造成的危害。 第三段（结尾段）再次强调指出孩提时代是青少年儿童精神发展的关键时期，父母和老师有必要严格的区分运用惩罚的优劣性。 经典词汇 1. 区分是非 distinguish right from wrong 2. 一种可以接受的方式 an acceptable way 3. 划分界线 make the distinction 经典词汇 4. 对孩子施加惩罚 inflict punishment on children 5. 恰当、适度地使用… use sth. appropriately and moderately 6. 被给予优先考虑 be given priority 经典词汇 7. 乱丢垃圾 litter up 8. 清理教室 tidy up the classroom 9. 被广泛地采用 be used extensively 经典词汇 10. 对某人产生不良影响 affect sb. in a negative way have a negative effect on sb. 11. 进行体罚 impose corporal punishment 12. 激起某人的怒火和反抗 provoke one’s anger and protest 经典词汇 13. 建立某人的思维方式 establish one’s way of thinking 14. 精神发展的一个阶段 a stage of mental development 15. 温和的惩罚 mild punishment 经典词汇 16. 给某人一个教训 teach sb a good lesson 17. 在某人的心灵上笼罩阴影 cast a shadow on one’s heart 18. 进行区分 draw the line Should teachers and parents use punishment in child education? Should teachers and parents use punishment in child education? It is generally believed that adults should help children to distinguish right from wrong. And punishment is an acceptable way of making that distinction. However, when adults want to inflict punishment on their children as a method of education, they should use it appropriately and moderately. In the first place, good use of punishment should be given priority. It’s crucial to give young children instructions when they have made some mistakes. For instance, if a child litters up in the classroom, his teacher may ask him to clean the classroom on his own. By tidying up the classroom, the child gets to know the significance of protecting public environment. However, if punishment is used extensively, it will affect the children in a negative way. If parents and teachers imposes many corporal punishments, they could only provoke children’s anger and protest. To concl