职场邮件培训--+入职必备课件.ppt

初级篇 新人入职 写好第一封邮件 孔乙己说：你知道名字有N种写法吗？ kennyliu kenny kenny.liu kenny liu KennyLiu kennyLiu kenny liu Kenny X X X X X X X X Kenny Liu √ 初级篇 新人入职 写好第一封邮件 你到底懂不懂该怎么写？ 初级篇 新人入职 写好第一封邮件 One day, Jim go back home from school. When he walk by a river, suddenly he heard a voice, “Help!! Help!!”. Jim look through the voice and found a little girl is struggling in the river and water almost cover her head. At that very critical moment, Jim drop his bag and jump to the river then save the girl up to the land. Jim` s brave is appreciated by his headmaster. 先看一个故事： 如果你是这个学校的校长，请试图给Jim的父母发封邮件，告诉他们情况。 初级篇 新人入职 写好第一封邮件 Dear Jim` s mother, One day, Jim go back home from school. When he walk by a river, suddenly he heard a voice, “Help!! Help!!”. Jim look through the voice and found a little girl is struggling in the river and water almost cover her head. At that very critical moment, Jim drop his bag and jump to the river then save the girl up to the land. I am very appreciate your son` s brave, thank you. Regards, Headmaster 当Jim父母读到这段话时： 校长又来发一些无聊邮件了 怎么回事？我儿子被水淹了喊救命？？ 神马情况？最后还谢谢我儿子的勇敢？ 初级篇 新人入职 写好第一封邮件 Dear Jim` s mother, Congratulations! Your son did a very good job that he saved a girl` s life today. Today, Jim go back home from school. When he walk by a river, suddenly he heard a voice, “Help!! Help!!”. Jim look through the voice and found a little girl is struggling in the river and water almost cover her head. At that very critical moment, Jim drop his bag and jump to the river then save the girl up to the land. I am appreciate your work and home education to Jim, thank you very much. Regards, Headmaster 总 分 总 开门见山，先说结果 有条有理，详细叙述 重申主题，收尾有力 初级篇 新人入职 写好第一封邮件 写好内容的技巧：列表（List） 初级篇 新人入职 写好第一封邮件 用List的好处有很多，比如格式会很清晰，逻辑条理会很清晰，可以方便的加Comments，可以方便的Mark信息。 用list的好处： 1. 格式清晰 2. 逻辑条理清晰 3. 可以方便加comment Comment: 这是个好培训 4. 可以方便的mark [Fixed] 初级篇 新人入职 写好第一封邮件 Hi Candy, The attachment is the bug list, please check it out. Thanks, Kenny Liu 附件预览 总体印象 一目了然 初级篇 新人入职 写好第一封邮件 能否让邮件看