基础写作范例.pptVIP

WRITING; 基础写作的评分标准？ 1 2 3 4 ;Describe one of your teachers, and let other students guess whom you are describing.;When describing a person, we describe him from his age, appearance, character, or his working style etc.;Lets try!;步骤一：把相关信息归类，并用中文句子准确描述（每类信息不限句子数量，但需写出每句话的主语）。 1. __________________________________ 2. __________________________________ 3. __________________________________ 4. __________________________________ 5. __________________________________;5. （他能）和学生打成一片。 （他）和蔼可亲， （他）深受学生的爱戴和尊敬。;步骤二：句子所需的词汇，短语，句型;步骤二：句子所需的词汇，短语，句型;步骤二：句子所需的词汇，短语，句型;步骤二：句子所需的词汇，短语，句型;步骤二：句子所需的词汇，短语，句型;1.判断A部分的句子属于B部分的哪个句型。 A: (A) She often gives students advice. (B) She loves teaching. (C)Alice, our English teacher, is a fashionable young lady. (D) She lets us practise by ourselves. (E) She never talks much in class. B: （1）主语＋系动词＋表语 （2）主语＋谓语（不及物动词） （3）主语＋谓语（及物动词）＋宾语 （4）主语＋谓语（及物动词）＋直接宾语＋间接宾语 （5）主语＋谓语（及物动词）＋宾语＋宾语补足语 ;步骤三：连词成句(简单句);步骤三：连词成句;步骤四：合并句子（按需要使用介词短语、非谓语动词短语、并列句、定语从句等其他复合句） ;步骤五：连句成篇（按需要使用各类连接词） 1．Listing conjunctions 并列：______, neither…nor, not only …but also 2) 递进: also, __________, in addition, ____________, moreover... 3) 转折: ______, ___________, while... 4) 因果: ______, ___________, therefore, as a result… ; Bruce, our English teacher, who is from England, is about 40 years old. He is tall and thin with a pair of glasses on his nose. He is strict with us in our study; besides, he prepares his lessons well and corrects our homework carefully. His teaching style is quite different from that of the others; moreover, he always encourages us to think hard and develop our ability to study on our own. He often helps us, cares for us, and is very kind to us; what’s more, he always plays basketball and footb