重点推荐thelakofresponsibility.PDFVIP

新东方朱伟 必威体育精装版发布：新东方朱伟09年考研英语大作文预测三 这段时间工作过于繁忙所以推迟了发布时间，还请大家见谅，再次郑重说明，大家不用每 天来关注这里，可以过段时间来一次，反正在考前半个月都会贴完，一次来下就是，专心 考研才是重点，这些文章只是给大家一个切入点和思路，还是那句话，模仿写作，自己多 多练笔才是出路。加油！！ 重点推荐: the lack of responsibility 写作切入点（brainstorming）: 三段论(字数标准化，190字—220字左右) 1. depictions (描写图画，提出宏观见解段)：enterprise,milk station, milch cow,grass responsibility. (what?) 2. analysis（分析展开原因段）:responsibility is a keyword that we should never disregard,defined not only as the courage to face every foreseeable risk,but as the braveness to entail every malpractice when it really takes place as well, the shortage of responsibility or even conscience(1) inner cause: destructive influence emanating from the decay of morality, materialism (2） outer impetus: deficient supervisal gives rise to the fearless adventurer who is at the risk of anything ,not to say to deviate from his own liability ,to pursue as many as profits. Case Melamine-laced Milk Incident (why?) 3. prospect（展望，提出建议段）(1)to enact related law to avoid the behavior of kicking the ball when something bad happen, to reinforce our supervisal mechanism(2)to regain our Chinese traditional virtue,which is called“who would enter the hell if I wouldn’t”, undoubtedly,to learn to be responsible for the blunder means sensible Unflinchingness (how?) 新东方朱伟 （前面这个部分为我的brainstorming过程，正如课堂上所说，大家会发现两个问题：第 一是审题，这篇文章是很容易写偏题的，因为主题不应该是责任，而是怎么会没有人愿意 承担责任，漫画的主题把握非常重要，所以我的展开在回答what,why,how时，围绕的都是 学会承担责任这个主题，而不是责任对我们社会有多重要。今年考研很可能直接考社会需 要责任这个话题，并不会考的这么直接像我漫画中那么难，所以希望大家到时注意审题！！） 范文演示： 范文演示： 范范文文演演示示：： When the issue of poisonous milk powder gains an overwhelming focus from the public,what are these malefactors doing?As we can see from the depiction, enterprise,milk station, milch cow and even grass are trying to find someone scapegoating for this credit crisis, in my view point,that’s nothing to do with the credit but the problem of responsibility