年浙江省高考英语书面表达范文.pptVIP

* * 2007年浙江省高考英语书面表达范文： I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only. As we all know, a good learning environment is vital if we want to study English well. Classes taught in English provide students with such an environment. When English is the only language used in the classroom, students will have more opportunities to practise listening and speaking. Therefore, they will be able to learn more quickly. However, there are also some problems with this teaching method. As we haven’t mastered enough English words, sometimes we may find it difficult to follow the teacher. Slow learners may even lose interest in English. Practice makes perfect. To learn English well requires a lot of practice. Therefore, I like my English classes to be taught completely in English. 分析：按照“半开放”的命题设计思路，要求 考生就“英语课的教师授课语言”发表自己 的看法。话题贴近学生生活，人人有话可 说，有感可发，且发挥空间大。能较好地 考查考生的书面表达能力。 范文共117个单词（不包括已提供的开 头部分），11个句子，含有4个从句，分为 三个段落。全文语言优美，运用了较复杂 的结构和高级词汇，如从句、分词、不定 式等，运用了主题句。结构合理，层次清 晰，上下文连贯，观点明确。具体分析如下： ⑴I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only.（第一句开门见山，直接切题， 表明态度） ⑵As we all know（As引导的非限制性定语从 句）, a good learning environment is vital if we want to study English well（条件状语从句） . （是主题句，紧跟其后的三、四两句是细节、 支撑句） ⑶Classes taught in English（过去分词做定语） provide students with such an environment. （词组运用：provide…with） ⑷When English is the only language used in the classroom（过去分词作后置定语）, students will have more opportunities to practise listening and speaking.（不定式作后 置定语） ⑸Therefore（连接性副词，使之与上文 连贯）, they will be able to learn more quickly.（小结，合乎逻辑的推理） ⑹However,（转折，第二段开始） there are also some problems with this teaching method.（主题句，进入“问题分析”） ⑺As we haven’t mastered enough English words（状语从句）, sometimes we may find it difficult to follow the teacher. （it作形式宾语，不定式作真正宾语的结构） ⑻Slow learners may even lose interest in English.（小结，合乎逻辑的推理） ⑼Practice makes perfect.（第三段开始， 谚语运用恰到好处，是本段的主题句， 也是本篇短文很关键的“论据”） ⑽To learn English well(不定式做主语) requires a lot of pr