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写作中较重大的错误。 1.不知道如何表示分段。 2.未能正确使用标点。逗号句号乱用。 正确做法： 1. 每段前面空四个字母的空格 （若没空四个字母，就是段与段之间要空一整行。） 2. First，it is convenient to… 范文：（开头已给出，所以接下去写：） It is believed that riding bicycles is of great benefit to our health. It is a good way to build up our bodies. Besides, it is convenient for us to park the bikes wherever we go. We don’t need to be anxious about the place where we can park our bicycles. There is no doubt that it is a good choice for us to ride bikes as a consequence of too many cars on the road. As it is known to us, cars can produce terrible gas and pollute the air, which is really bad for our health(do damage to our health). Bicycle is so environmentally- friendly that we we need it when going to work. Last but not least, it is easy for us to enjoy the beauty of the nature on bicycle for it is slow and safe. From the bottom of my heart, I hope the government can add more bicycle paths and provide more space for bicycles. (①add more bicycle paths体现题目要求：呼吁增设自行车道 ②provide more space for bicycles体现作者对于政府只考虑机动车不顾及非机动车这一做法的不满) 写作的目的：1.要传达什么信息。（审题）2.要引起读者的共鸣或关注。（要用好的表达） 月考作文很可能还是和汽车或自行车相关话题。要注意审题。 很可能还是半开放作文：自己对。。。车、交通、环境、等的看法考虑。 千万别再写某人是green或green car As we all know, the bicycle is an eco-friendly means of transportation. Not only does it never give off polluted gas but also never make noise. Also, riding bicycles bring great benefits to cyclist’s health which the government should attach more importance to. Another advantage of bicycle is its contribution to the solution of traffic jam. There would be more space and much cleaner roads in consequence of the wide use of bicycles and the less use of cars. Last but not least, with the outstanding design and technology that scientists have been studying for a long time, there will be more and more creative ideas to add to bikes. To sum up, I suggest that the government should add special paths only for bicycles and carry out some other fair policies to solve the traffic problems.