获奖作文的奥秘——厚积而薄发（The mystery of winning compositions is thick and thin）.doc

获奖作文的奥秘——厚积而薄发（The mystery of winning compositions is thick and thin） Fujian Mao Jinjin (instructor) The magic number is based on a real event in life. The little writer experiences the whole story and writes it naturally and truly. The description of the fire scene in this article is detailed and specific. The language is simple and the style of writing is concise and fluent, which enables the readers to have the feeling of being personally on the scene. In the aspect of conception, the author adopts the suspense to begin with, fascinating, to unfold the plot around the magic numbers, and to express the childrens psychology in the narration. The success of this exercise is the result of a long written diary, accumulation of material, and accumulation of details. Zheng point classmates from the age of five began to write diaries, not written words, some with simple strokes to indicate, and some use only she can understand the Mark said, and also ask father or mother. For seven years, she did not stop writing diaries, a pile of thick diary, for her composition has accumulated a wealth of material, but also improve her observation ability, analytical thinking ability, language expression ability. Her composition has been published many times and has won prizes. Mr. Lu Xun is one of the three secrets of writing a pen, and the best way is to write a pen diary. For students, keeping a diary is one of the effective ways to improve your writing ability. You may as well try it. Accumulation of material for the composition Li Weizhen (parents) Chinese saying goes: one cant make bricks without straw. If writing a composition is better than cooking, then the materials used in the article are like rice for cooking. Where does the material come from? First, by careful and careful observation, and two by a little bit of accumulation. There are many ways to accumulate material. We think journaling is a simple and easy way to do it. Based on the above understanding, about four year