我的六级作文.ppt

作文专项练习之一 评分重点项目 关联词 同义替换（词汇+句型） 内容：不跑题 六级考试作文闪光点---- 高分作文标志 　　1. 主动和被动语态交替使用 2：是否长短句交叉; 3、是否会使用插入语; 4、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词; 5、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词; 6、句型使用是否准确、地道。 写作技巧： 　　1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 修改前: I think although a name is necessary in social life, we should not overemphasize its importance. 修改后： From my perspective, although a name is indispensable in social life, its importance should not be overemphasized. 2.巧用插入语 除去所有的不可能,剩下的就是再不可能也是真相。 在《福尔摩斯探案集》里找到的原文： When all other contingencies（意外事件） fail, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth. 插入语的类型 A. 副词插入语：frankly， especially， fortunately， indeed， however 　　 　　【译文】但是其他的人认为… 原文1: However, other individuals take the attitude that … 修改后： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that … B. 短语插入语：generally speaking， to tell the truth， in a sense， in a word，needless to say 　　 【译文】总而言之，家长不该无视电脑游戏对小孩的副作用。 【例句】Parents， in a word， should never neglect the side-effects of computer games on their children. C. 短句插入语：I suppose， as I see it， I believe， what is important 【译文】重要的是，环境对人的性格有深远影响。 【例句】Environment， what is important， has a far-reaching influence on one’s personality. 　　 3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, more and more等等) 六级写作30个最经典的替换词 　　1.individuals替换(people ) 　　2: positive, favorable，promising(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good 　　3:unfeasible , unadvisable, unfavorable, adverse, detrimental (有害的)替换bad 　　如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换 　　eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it comes to graduation ,as a result, their records are less impressive. 　　4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many…if not most)替换many. 注：用many, if not most 一定